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Rhymed

YouSpinMeRightRound
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    So, I decided to make a team on shoddy and decided to post it so people could help me improve it & what not. so here it is.

    Salamence @ Life Orb
    6Hp 252 atk 252 spd
    Adamant
    Dragon Claw
    Dragon Dance
    Stone Edge
    EQ......................................Another physical sweeper

    Donphan @ leftovers
    Impish?
    220Hp 36 Atk 252 Def
    Ice Shard
    Knock off/Roar
    Rapid Spin
    EQ.......................................Physical wall, Phazer and King arthur all in one!


    Charizard @ Salac berry
    Hasty
    6 hp 252 atk 252 speed
    Belly Drum
    Sub
    Brick Break/ EQ
    Fire punch...................................Someone please comment on this, I don't know if Belyzard will work in this team.


    Azelf @ Focus Sash
    Timid (may replace with modest, getting tired of speed+ natures T_T)
    252 sp.atk 252 speed
    Flamethrower
    Nasty plot
    HP (Fighting)
    Psychic.............................Keeping sash, I got donphan as a spinner now, so i have to worry a little less.


    Persian @ Focus Sash (Don't shoot me for two, :D)
    Hasty
    252 Sp.atk 252 Speed
    Hypnosis
    Nasty Plot
    Water Pulse / Icy wind
    Swift ..................................................Not getting rid of persian- Despite the bad comments. He rocks. and keeping sash

    Milotic @ Leftovers
    Bold
    148 Hp 228 Def 132 Sp. attack
    Surf
    Ice beam
    Recover
    Hypnosis........Special Wall and sleeper, Lemme know wether to put RestTalk on it.

    I Edited the team To take the mixed walls out, and put in Dedicated ones, and i Swapped roserade for salamence- not persian, look up to find out why. Rate the edited one now :D

    Well, Thats it, I accept Help & CONSTRUCTIVE criticism (I spelt that wrong :D)
     
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    Sunnybeam is a bad choice, all you're doing is inviting in fire types to resist pretty much your entire set and OHKO you with a 1.5 boost to their already STABed moves, so that needs changin. Specs is really the way to go on it.

    Get rid of those sashes, stealth rock, spikes, sandstorm ect all screw them over leaving you with a wasted item.

    You've completely ODed on special sweepers, switch one for a physical attacker. More specifically persian, it really sucks

    The EV spreads on those walls are ewwww, tangela wants 252HP/220Def/36SpDef and Cressy wants 252HP/152SpDef/106Def with light screen. 2 mixed walls dont really work, your better off with dedicated ones.

    I dont know if bellyZard works, I've never seen it. I'll leave that to someone else. Some of your movesets are a bit off, but I dont have time to reel off all the standards. Find out the standard azelf
     
    To add what Gofre said, Sunny Day needs to revolve around the team. Unless it's just to piss of a person you know relies on Sandstorm, you must use the Sun for the entire team.
     
    so, ok... I edited it, hopefully to cover most of the weaknesses, rate again :P
     
    Sash = no, because SS = GG, Focus Sash.

    Furthermore, there's Hail for non-Ice Types, which is precisely what Azelf is.

    Having more then one Focus Sasher is just asking for weather-type teams, most notably SS, to say "Wow, SS weak, yum."


    Hippowdon, Tyranitar, etcetera. You should get the point after those two.

    Abomasnow... Yeah.

    Knock Off would be pretty helpful.


    Now that I think of it, wouldn't Milo be a better lead? Bulky Water leads are awesome.

    ~ Itachi 2008 ~
     
    not exactly sure tbh, I can put milotic as a lead, as you said, and since TTar/hippowdon leads are common, i could put rain dance on it.., to counter that weather problem (they should have like a weather version of rapid spin)
     
    Yeah, then they maul your milotic, switch out and switch back in. Thier weather is permanent, yours isnt. Dont use sashes
     
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