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Season of the Star

Super Torchic

HEY!!!WHO AT MY SOCKS!!!
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    Authors note^^: hey this is a FF that I wrote and gonna post its not that good but >> oh ignore the title I can't think of a better one so yaaaaXD You'll know why I put the title as this later^^I'm not exactly you know*points to age* ya....
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    ?hmm??? Where am I??? Who are you?.wait I remember?but why am I here??? Those black horns on your cape?WHAT!!!It can?t be?.AHHHH!!!SOMEONE HELP ME!!!? A scream of pain rang through out the quiet country side but it was midnight no one noticed that one girl is missing from the nearby village, Fire clan.
    ?Hey, Iris, remember that girl you knew from fire clan????
    ?Safire??? Ya what about her?
    ?She?s missing? a girl with hazel eyes and light brown hair said and stifled a cry. Iris a girl from the village Rainbow clan and Silver from Thunder clan was two of the special people that got selected to possess powers of the elements. Safire was one of them too. But now the number is down to five because six of them are either not found or gone to the evil side.
    ?Silver, we have to find the rest of the people, I know were they are but I can?t get there fast enough you?re gonna have to use a flying type?
    ?Hey stupid head none of us have a flying type?
    ?But Safire does,?
    ?She did she never told anyone, Angel was her joy and pride?
    ?Doesn?t she keep with her??
    ?No it?s with Selena?
    ?BUT SHE?S AT LEAST A HUNDRED MILES AWAY FROM US!!!? Silver screamed and sweatdroped. Selena was a girl from Wind Clan although her real name is Selenis, she preferred Selena.
    Silver dropped her back pack on the ground and took out two tickets, on the blue tickets that was wrinkled with time it said, ?The Altaria Express, We?ll take you to the ends of the world?
    ?Yep, one way tickets to anywhere? Silver grinned and remembered back then before everything started before her future self came to her and gave her the marble, of course Safire had a fit about risking her life to do something she didn?t want to but she calmed down?over time. They went to the nearest Altaria Express stop, Fire Clan. Fire Clan was one of the biggest villages in the ten mile radius. Of Course its also the central of business technology, travel, and shopping which is something Iris can?t resist to do. The Altaria express was on the outskirts of the town being it having a lot of flying pokemon and what not.
    ?Silver!!!?
    ?Masco? Silver yelled smiling ?Its wonderful to see you again, when did you start working here?
    ??ummmm?Yesterday? Masco a boy with natural gray hair and brown eyes and a dazzling smile said.
    ?Going to wind clan?
    ?Yep wind clan the barrenness place in the world? There is not a stop there but there is one close to it at?Shadow Clan?
    ?Shadow Clan, I hope Sombra isn?t there? Sombra was the boy who received the power of the shadows. His powers can only be beat by Iris and Safire but since Safire isn?t here they?ll have to avoid shadow clan?

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    Authors note: my gosh I can?t spell today.. I know the ciries aren't real but hey I don't like writing with real places^^;I know this is short but hey it?s the intro ^^; it can be chapter one I guess XD c ya?ll next time.
     
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    It seems interesting, but its very hard to read. You shuold write with proper grammar and put spaces between your paragraphs. Don't try to rush the story to fast either. I suggest you write your story in a word proccesor because it looks like you wrote in the reply box. its kind of confusing introducing all those clans and charachters at once. You should spend some time describing them more
     
    I wrote it in Microsoft word..>> I guess it broke(me added to much custom words to itO_O)
     
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