Slaving over you (song)

[Poet of Darkness]

Okay this is brand new.


Yeah I'm so tired
Of slaving over you.
Because everything you make me do
Takes to much out of me.

(chorus sing twice)
Because you are the one
Who I love.
And that's why
I still slave for you.
Because you are the best.
The one I love the most.

No matter what I have to do for you
I'd do it all anyway.
And that's because
I love you so much.

(chorus sing once)
Because you are the one
Who I love.
And that's why
I still slave for you.
Because you are the best.
The one I love the most.

 

[jasonresno]

Frankly it seemed like you ran out of words, if it was a poem that could be forgiven but yeah.

 

[Poet of Darkness]

Well... Do you like it?

 

[jasonresno]

Yeah, It is OK. Just try to add more to it so the choruses aren't the only substance.

 

[Natsuki]

This isn't a bad song. ^^ I think you did kinda get to the point where you were just filling in space. XD But this is rather good considering your age. ^____^ I think it's cute. <3~~~ Good work espyon luver. ^^

~Kelsey

 

[Poet of Darkness]

Thanks Kelsey and asonresno!