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Sometimes...

Envy

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    Okay,so this is my first poem.So I don't know if anyone will like it,but if U think it's bad then just tell me so I can change it a little.^^

    Sometimes

    Sometimes I wonder if I should really do it.
    I have that little voice in my head.
    It's telling me no,don't do it.
    But then that other one is cheering me on.

    Who can I trust?
    Who can I rely on now when I need them the most?
    I know I shouldn't be doing this.
    But who is telling me otherwise?

    I know that other people don't care,they would
    have spoken up by now if they did.
    Right?

    I don't know what to say about all of this,
    but I can say that I love him.
    Even if he doesn't love me.
    I want him to be happy,and I want to be too.

    Maybe if I leave,this feeling will go away.
    Then I can have a normal life again.
    But not here.
    Not anymore...​
     
    Uh,Thanks! I thought know one would really like it. And a 100/10? Is that really a rating?And I don't really think I'm that really better then anyone here...just a normie! Thanks for your comment!!^^
     
    woah!!!!!!!!!i luv it soooo much its so nice cute,cute,cute i luv it!!!!!^^
     
    Your welcome see you can be a famous poet^^
     
    Hahaha,thats not ture! It's just that when I feel down or something keeps going though my mind;I have to get it on paper or I'll go crazy if it keeps going though my mind!
     
    great poem,like the rhryme but the title just no link with it.
     
    Thanks,If U wanted to be called something else how 'bout U name it and I'll see if I like the name better then the one that is on.
     
    well t think it will sound beter not anymore becase thas what is about rigth,i you like you ca check my poem i will rewrite on a post.just check poetry.
     
    Very well done on your part. I enjoyed reading it.
     
    No words can explain this poem.

    I enjoyed reading it!
    Keep it up!
     
    YAY!! Go ThanhThuy! It was a great poem! :D
     
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