[song] Always Here

[Geometric-sama]

And isn't it odd that I return to Poetry after I'm demodded? Yes, I haven't written anything in a long time. This... is something I wrote this morning. It was something I needed to write; some of you know that Mandi and I were both friends and rivals, and linked by the Joel obsession. I won't bore you any longer. Music? Yes, it has music. Will you ever hear it? Maybe. For now, it's something I needed to write to get off my chest...

Always Here

dedicated to the memory of Mandi Cormier
a friend, a rival, a staff member
1986-2005

I wonder if you can hear me now
From the sky
Are you playing with the angels you loved?
And I want to know why
This had to happen to someone like you

But you
You're always here
You're living here with us
And when you're up there looking down
Think of us
We're always here with you

You leave us with the memories of you
Asking why
Always happy, always laughing
Why did you have to die?
You were too young to leave this world

But you
You're always here
You're living here with us
And when you're up there looking down
Think of us
We're always here with you

I know you wouldn't wanna hurt us... (no, no, no)
I know you'd want us to get on with our lives
But hey
You know it's true
It's gonna be hard living without you

But you
You're always here
You're living here with us
And when you're up there looking down
Think of us
We're always here with you

And you'll always be here

~Jedi_Amara
18 March 2005​

 

[O]

Whoa... sad. It's pretty good, so I'll give it a 8/10 But if it really was a song, it would have longer verses. What did she die of? Drink Driving from some random person?

 

[Anacortes]

That's what I don't know and don't want to know. The poem is really nice, but not fit to be a song. But since you were a mod here and all, there can't simply be that many mistakes. Good job, I'm sure Mandi will love it, if she sees it..

 

[Geometric-sama]

Modship has nothing to do with it....

And the song fits the music I wrote for it... the verses are just as long as they need to be...

 

[Shana]

That's really nice, JA...I like it a lot, it's tearjerking, really...

 

[Geometric-sama]

Thanks Star.... why is it that the saddest things always get me writing again?

 

[Dignity]

It's really nice, JA... I'm sure she'd love it... ~origin

 

[Trikip]

That's a beautiful poem, JA. I know this is dumb, but who is Mandi?

 

[Geometric-sama]

Mandi was a PC member, a Joel Madden obsessor like me, a Good Charlotte fan and a staff member on my Good Charlotte website. She died in a car accident a couple of weeks ago.

 

[saul]

What was her user-name? BTW That's really sad, It's always sad when things like that happen....

 

[Natsuki]

As I had done with Karli's poem dedicated to Mandi, I shall restrain myself from giving suggestions, for the sake and honor of our dear Mandi. <3

You did a really nice job with this JA, and I'm absolutely sure that Mandi would love that people care so much about her. ^______^ I give it two thumbs up. ^_~

~Kelsey

 

[Hoshi]

Thanks Star.... why is it that the saddest things always get me writing again?

Jedi: you put your feelings into it, that what made you write it.

 

[Little Paul]

;-; beautiful song, Sorry, R.I.P mandi

 

[Eliana]

o_o; Nice JA, But this was revived...>>; People, don't revive if it's a month dead...

 

[Miyu-chan]

Thread *CLOSED*

don't revive threads.

 

[Kyosuke]

Its ok to revive old threads that are writing related, but its not ok if it is a discussion thread ^^'

*Re-opened*

 

[Legolas]

oh, kk. Its a awsome peom 10/10, but i wa wondering, who is this Mandi? o.O

 

[Geometric-sama]

Mandi was a well-liked member of PC, and like me at the time, she was a Good Charlotte addict. She died in a car accident earlier this year.

 

[Samurai X]

Wow, what a nice poem.

I didn't know her but Mandi, rest in peace.

 

[Faltzer]

I am very sorry to hear that Jedi.You must miss her alot...Rest in Peace Mandi..I never knew her...