Starshine

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Gazing into the night sky
the stars are ablaze
fireflies are what they are
my eyes lie in a haze

True beauty at its' best
when looking up
eyes filled to the brim
with light like a cup

Lovely gaze and
serene Grace
Now it is time
time for the race

Reach for the heavens
reach for the light
reach for the vibrance
reach for the sight

sight of true beauty
envisioned by those who see
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short poem......with the last line not making sense...XD

 

[[Technya]]

Aw Cy! That's beautiful!
I could actually picture the fireflies in the night sky as I read it :3
Once again wonderful work as always ^^

 

[Supreme Edgeboy Max]

Meh.. short, sweet and awesome. Describes how I see *her* in my life as a star. Or thats the feeling I got reading it. Good job Kenny!

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Thanks you two for your comments. ^^

 

[Mitzykitty]

It's so beautiful ^ ^ I can almost see the fireflies. Nice job.

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Thanks Mitzy. ^^ I'm glad this showed a lot of imagination.

 

[Midori Chi]

It's amazing what a few adjectives can do..I also can picture the fireflies...^^

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Thanks to you Midori. ^^ Means a lot.

 

[Greta]

Oh, Cybex, even though its short, I think its really one of my favourite from your work =)
I love your use of words, and how the whole poem flows. Congrats...^^

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

Thank you Greta. ^^ It means a lot.

 

[bna_li]

Have I not replied? That's strange. I think it's not bad, except the end, you might want to change that.(Short)

 

[Hinoshi-chan]

Oh wow , its so beatiful * huggles cybex * its a huggle cause youre work is the best!

its short and sweet, keep up the work