Sunalli's Sprites

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    I only have a few to show right now, since I haven't done many pixels until lately. I'm hoping to have some more made real soon!

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    I'd really like some constructive criticism so I can get better. I'll try and update this post as I make more sprites!
     
    The reposed charmander looks like a fetus... LOL but good job
     
    Those are really good, but I am worried about Sunalli's tan. Was she locked up in the basement for the whole summer or what? xD
    EDIT: I don't want to offend anyone, I just find it amusing :)
     
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    Animation Edit: Her legs (the brighter on) don't have shading... (Specially the part where her skirt/dress is)
    The scratch charmander looks like it is stomping it's tail :D
    Was it me or was the head of both charizard and charmeleon's head was just a slight edit of HG/SS's?
     
    Wow, your pretty good. But the revamps could be better.
     
    They're pretty good. You done a lot more than I could hope to do. Charizard's tail in the reposes looks a little funny and the revamps have black outlines. Your Fakemon is pretty cool. I think your character looks awesome too. One side of her hair curls up at strange angle though. Overall, they're quite impressive though.
     
    Arishoz said:
    Charizard's tail in the reposes looks a little funny
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    It looks detached from the body, has an awkward position, and looks unusually long.



    Everything else just has small shading irregularities and line issues, -the most being the revamps- but it's overall good.
     
    pokedialga said:
    Was it me or was the head of both charizard and charmeleon's head was just a slight edit of HG/SS's?
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    That's most likely because, since they are my first, I was looking at the sprites trying to make it. I saw that after I had finished and didn't feel like changing them so I just left it the way it was this time.

    To everyone who said something about Charizard's tail, I just stuck with what I got xD; And the revamps are my first try at doing something like that, so I know they're not anything good.

    Thank you though! I'll try my best to get better :)
     
    Bambon is really cute :3 and i liked the charmander too
     
    Oh I like the charmander too.. uh 3 I got to hand it too you skills what else could I say other than a 15 sentens rant but that charmander is telling me not too five stars out of 5.5.
     
    Your Bambon's head does feel like it matches its body. The shape and positioning of the head are more that of a bipedal animal, or perhaps a quadruped sitting up (like a cat) rather than one standing on its four legs. I think that because the body is so horse-like I expect to see more of a neck like on a horse or an animal similar to a horse (like a giraffe). I think more vibrant or warmer colors would look good on it, too, and make it a little cuter. The brown has too much grey in it for me. It's still quite nice.
     
    Your sprites are quite good, but you need some revision on outlining and shading. Like, look at each part of the sprite closely and check to see if they're perfect. If you don't think they are, try something else.

    Would you be "SunoWolf" on deviantART? :]
     
    i like all the charizard revamps i'm waiting for ur next pixel project wish u luck.
    P.S hope the bambon evolves to dragon type
     
    Sunalli said:
    I only have a few to show right now, since I haven't done many pixels until lately. I'm hoping to have some more made real soon!

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    This is my favourite. Nothing looks abnormal. Good effort. 10/10

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    I'm not fond of fakemon. But anyway I would rate this 5/10 still good work.

    I'd really like some constructive criticism so I can get better. I'll try and update this post as I make more sprites!
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    These looks fanatastic! Just a few more things:
    Charmander 2: Perfect but it looks really familiar to Pokemon R/B/Y charmander sprite, maybe not. Maybe it's just me. 9.5/10
    Charmeleon 2: Charmeleon looks better than before! 10/10
    Charizard 2: It looks nearly perfect just a bit small and squished but overall good. 9.5/10

    These look good. But I would just metion a few things.
    Charmander 1 : He is good but he looks to round and small. 6/10
    Charmeleon 1: He looks good as well but his pose/position looks unnatural. 8/10
    Charizard 1: This one looks great but his tail it to thick. But the rest great! 8.5/10
     
    Hello! Can I request please? can you make a fakemon called Rockeon? It's like an evolution of
    Eevee too.
     
    somecrazyperson said:
    Hello! Can I request please? can you make a fakemon called Rockeon? It's like an evolution of
    Eevee too.
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    not trying to minimod, but i dont think requests are allowed.
     
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