Survivors of Kint.

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    Once a jolly old village, Kint is now destroyed. There were some people however, who survived. These people are have no place in the society. The Emperor wants to get rid of them. He is sending out search parties, top assassins... Who are they after? You.

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    Name -
    Age -
    Gender -
    Description -
    Survivor or Helper - [ You don't have to be a Survivor, you can be anyone ]
    Race - [ Refer to below. ]
    Weapon of choice -
    Secondary Weapon? -
    Other -

    I will wait for a few people to join and then I'll add my bio. BE CREATIVE. :)
     
    These people are have no place in the society.
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    Why? A little more story onto why it was destroyed, and why does the empreror want the survivors dead? Why do they have no place in society?
     
    Name - Patrick "Pat" Kormoon
    Age - 19
    Gender - Male
    Description - About 6'3", medium length untended black hair, muscular build. no shirt, ripped blue jeans
    Survivor or Helper - Survivor
    Race - Cacausian?
    Weapon of choice - Scythe
    Secondary Weapon? - Flail
    Other -
     
    Name -psiren
    Age - 20
    Gender -female
    Description - everything she wears is black and she always has a black mask on nobody know what her face looks like
    Survivor or Helper - [ You don't have to be a Survivor, you can be anyone ]helper
    Race - [ Refer to below. ]Cacausian?
    Weapon of choice - a long thin sword
    Secondary Weapon? -a mace
    Other -
     
    You need much more for this plot; you have given no information, no history...nothing.
    You have not followed the rules requiered, a plot is not made of three lines.

    Perhaps you could give some information and description on the village of Kint before it was destroyed and how it was then.

    Then you may want to explain why it was destroyed, because I can see no explanation on that, therefore giving the RPGer's no information as to what they are up against and why.

    How did these people survive and how come they have no place in society, and why does the emperor want them destroyed? (This would all come under 'why was the village destroyed')

    Who is the emperor, why did he destroy the village, and furthermore who are these assassins bent on destroying you?

    You also may want to use more commas instead of full stops as well.

    *Closed* until I am PMed with a better plot or it is posted in the ?Drawing board (idea discussion) thread in the RPG Lounge.
     
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