Swarm of Pontus... Feraligatr ex!

QFred

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    Card redone, picture link fixed...

    Pontus was the Greek Titan of the sea, and Feraligatr's picture's background has algae and stuff... so... But I know they usually live on swamps...

    I hope I'm not bashed for using this kind of thread title...

    Also, the attacks are supposed not to be original. I saw older Feraligatr cards, the Neo Genesis ones and I though the attacks should be re-used!

    Overall, I hope you like.


    PS: The big spaces between words are supposed to be lil water energies... I forgot about them when I saved... Will change the file to the correct one after I make some more cards...

    PS 2: Has anyone got any new holofoil for fakes... my ones come from ZEO... and are a little old...
     
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    Yeah, you've picked out the error I was going to mention. Attack texts all look a little close, and a smaller font would've been a better idea (also I'm not sure if you're using the REVIEWED attack effect text width, it was really a while back, well over a year and a half, that research reclassified attack effect text width at 95% instead of 89%. It looks a little too narrow, so I'm guessing you're using an old old old PSD text box. Widen the font, but set it to a smaller size. Otherwise, I think you're set. Grammar is correct, but you need to get those Water Energy in :)

    Placement, I'm not as keen eyed as I used to be, seeing as I've been out of the game a long time. I think your weakness is a tiny bit imprecise, and I would move the card's name and your retreat cost also just 1 pixel to the right. Just the 1. Attacks aren't wholly original, but I'll let it pass this time as it's a Pokémon-ex which have a bad habit of recycling old attacks and just beefing them up.

    On an unimportant note, the art is an interesting style, yet not what you would normally associate with a Pokémon-ex, but it's original nevertheless so you get credit for that :) Should really be holographic though.

    Wow, my first in-depth card analysis in a long long time... feel honoured!

    Good work anyway. Keep it up, 8/10
     
    nice card QFred CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!
    i noticed that the Attack name need to be 1 pixel right of the image border. the Weakness needs to be pushed left stlighty so that it looks correct on what is written on the tutorial.
    The attacks don't look orginally.
     
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    Yes, that was the other thing I forgot to mention! I also forget holographics.

    I'm, getting that new PSD box you said... or maybe improve my own... cause I made some changes...

    Also, the attacks are supposed not to be original. I saw older Feraligatr cards, the Neo Genesis ones and I though the attacks should be re-used!
    Click to expand...

    I redone it and redone my Symbolsheet...

    Hope you like it now...
     
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