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TD's first comic

Alex_

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    • Seen Jan 11, 2017
    To tell you the honest truth I wasnt aiming for a good plot/joke/point of story I was just trying to get the feel of making a comic and learning everything I could XD Anyway I used the tutorial Casty posted and it helped..TONS. C&C is welcome I suppose,although the plot sucks XD So..yeah its my first comic enjoy >.<
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    Well the sprites quality is very nice but the content....um...I didnt like the whole farting thing...but it was made really well...
     
    XD Thanks,And yeah I know that farting thing was stupid :P
     
    XD Thanks! No need to say sorry,I wasnt really focusing on the comedy or anything anyway. Thanks for the comments both of you =)
     
    XD Okay,im aawake now and ill try to explain it. Mario is wanting know know if Boo can fart because boo is made out of gas. The reason Mario is asking is because he wasnt sure if gas(Boo) could pass gas (Fart). I know its stupid,im going to focus on the plot for my next comic. Anyway thanks for the comment blazey :)
     
    XD Thanks I made a nerw comic,I think this is better.
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    Thanks,and yeah once you say it they are just standing there. XD
     
    Give credit to people who made the sprites that you're using if they ask for credit on the spritesheet. And use apostraphes in your comics. 6.5/10.
     
    Shinin said:
    Give credit to people who made the sprites that you're using if they ask for credit on the spritesheet. And use apostraphes in your comics. 6.5/10.
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    I DID give credit,check in the bottom right hand corner.
     
    1st one:

    Farting... A Nicee topic, but could be writen better~ 6/10


    2nd One:

    Now its better, the 'slides' [or whatever] are near eachother, and I can understand it, well, better... But I dont think it was funny. 7.5/10


    Yeah, Im lazy to write a complete rating, and Im also lazy to take a good look at the sprite positioning... Just go with that, I know ya will do great ones day [unless ya get offended and stop o_o]
     
    JOKES...NEED...
    PUNCHLINES, D00D.

    You can't just have a bunch of ridiculous dialogue and expect everything to just work out. You gotta actually plan the comic out beforehand, or it's guaranteed to fail. Think of some kind of funny conclusion, because there's no point in having a comic without any kind of comedic value, or interesting dialogue, or visual appeal. Your comics look like they were made by five-year-olds.
     
    READ THE POST ABOVE YOURS D00D.
    I just said I cant think of any jokes to put XD
     
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