Team Ecruteak

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Comic Name
Team Ecruteak

Characters
Darren
Taz
Oak
Mom
Dad
Team Ecruteak
Pokemon

Places
Kanto
Johto
Hoenn
My Own Region

Series 1
Episode 1*Text should be easier to see now*

Please Enjoy!
Credit To Mazilwolf Wit Some Overworlds!

 

[[NovaPirate]]

Okay: 1. it's too small for me to read
2. Your grammar is as good as my 7 year old brother's. (BTY, whats a SUBBUL??)
3. Why would Team Ecruteak bother with two young trainers.
4. How did they get to Pallet Town
5. You can't just skip their entire journey and have them meet a poke'mon, or else you would walk out of your house and be at Indigo Plateau in Fr/Lg.
Overall, it's a 3/10. That's the highest I ever give for comics like this, and that's for what originality I scrapped from this. :)

 

[强有力]

It is sub-bus and would you give me tips. I Need to know how to make my text easier to see.