Team Zeide

[Calder]

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"image removed"@ Occa Berry
Sturdy
100 HP/154 ATK/244 SPD
Adamant (+ATK/-SPA)
~ Earthquake
~ Explosion
~ Stealth Rock
~ Roar
- Steelix is my lead, Its nice resistances and defense help the stealth rock and he can stay out in Sandstorms. STAB is Earthquake and when the Roar gets a Revenger out like a Fire that will hurt my others he gets it low and if he has too he gets rid of it with Explosion.
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Speed Boost
252 ATK/4 DEF/252 SPE
Jolly (+SPE/-SPA)
~ Swords Dance
~ Baton Pass
~ X-Scissors
~ Sunny Day
- Ninjask is my Passer and Acts as a Physical Sweeper. Swords Dance with his Speed Boost makes Attack and Speed increase to help both his jobs. X-Scissors is his STAB and Sunny Day stops Weather teams. Focus Sash is to always get a Swords Dance and Speed Boost to Baton Pass just in case.
"image removed"@ Life Orb
Magic Guard
216 ATK/216 SPA/76 SPE
Quiet (+SPA/-SPE)
~ Double-Edge
~ Fire Blast
~ Grass Knot
~ Softboiled
- Clefable is my Wall and acts like a Special Sweeper. Life Orb with its special ability Magic Guard means no drawbacks and it also protects Clefable from Weather, Recoil of Double-Edge and more. Fire Blase and Grass Knots are for the pesky pokemon and Softboiled is for health.
"image removed"@ Toxic Orb
Poison Heal
48 HP/252 ATK/208 SPE
Adamant (+ATK/-SPA)
~ Swords Dance
~ Mach Punch
~ Seed Bomb
~ Facade
- Breloom is my Physical Sweeper using Toxic Orb with Poison Heal to heal and protect Breloom from status effects. Swords Dance is obvious for Attack boost and Mach Punch and Seed Bomb for type advantages and Facade is doubled from Poison becomes the STAB.
"image removed"@ Scope Lens
Sniper
252 ATK/4 DEF/252 SPE
Jolly (+SPE/-SPA)
~ Swords Dance
~ Night Slash
~ Earthquake
~ Cross Poison
- Drapion is what I call a Physical-Sniper (Physniper) Sweeper, he uses crits with his Sniper ability to do heavy damage. Everything supports this role pretty clear, Scope Lens increases the odds of crits and Night Slash and Cross Poison have high chances already. Earthquake for type advantage and Sword Dance powers up moves.
"image removed"@ Leftovers
Synchronize
152 HP/176 SPD/180 SPE
Timid (+SPE/-ATK)
~ Substitute
~ Calm Mind
~ Signal Beam
~ Psychic
- Alakazam is my Special Sweeper that can act as a substitute wall. Substitute is strong with the stats and can allow Calm Mind to be used easy. Everything else is self explained, Signal Beam and Psychic for damage, Psychic making the opponent weaker and Signal Beam confusing to allow more Calm Mind usage.

-TheZeide

 

[Anti]

I have no idea why this was approved. Most of your clauses are never used. In fact, I've never even heard of most of them. Any battles this team has had I'm going to guess were with your friends or something because no one on Shoddy (and also WiFi to the best of my limited knowledge) plays with any of yours rules and probably would never agree to them. There is no way for our raters to rate your team since this is for a metagame that doesn't exist, so there isn't any use in keeping this open, sorry.

Locked

 

[Anti]

I've talked to the OP over PM and he's fine with getting rid of his clauses, so I'm reopening this. I figured I would post again so everyone would notice that this is no longer locked. Go ahead and rate it.

 

[Pokedra]

DDGyarados smashes you after a DD, basically nothing can take a hit from it after it sets-up. Sunny Day on Ninjask does hinder it but then he'll KO Ninjask and hurt your team. Steelix falls to Waterfall, so does Clefable and Alakzam. Drapion dies to EQ and Breloom can survive a hit from non-Ice Fang variants but still can't really do much to it. SDScizor causes you some problems also, it can setup on Breloom and Drapion and then proceed to wipe your team out with Bullet Punch which everything dies to except for Steelix who is outsped and takes about 95% average sooo he'll fall to that pretty easily =[

Why are you running a Sash on Ninjask? SR wrecks it's Sash and does 50% to it. Plus Ninjask is metagame weak, I can't really see what it is doing since it'll probably die before it can pass anything =/ I'd honestly replace with with something like Sleep Talker Rotom-A. Heat form can work since Scizor usually run from that and it'll also help your Gyarados weak. Try this >>> Ninjask.

Rotom-H @ Leftovers
Nature : Bold
EV : 252 HP / 160 Def / 96 SpD
- Discharge / Thunderbolt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

Put Focus Blast > Signal Beam, it gives you the greatest coverage plus lets you smack Blissey and Ttar around.

Good luck with this team.

 

[wolf]

Rotom-H @ Leftovers
Nature : Bold
EV : 252 HP / 168 Def / 88 Speed
- Discharge / Thunderbolt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

Fixed the EVs, he doesn't have any coverage against SD Scizor so that will help him outrun it and burn it before it does anything crazy.

I'll come back later to give a full rate (if this is even a rate lol). ;3

 

[Calder]

DDGyarados smashes you after a DD, basically nothing can take a hit from it after it sets-up. Sunny Day on Ninjask does hinder it but then he'll KO Ninjask and hurt your team. Steelix falls to Waterfall, so does Clefable and Alakzam. Drapion dies to EQ and Breloom can survive a hit from non-Ice Fang variants but still can't really do much to it. SDScizor causes you some problems also, it can setup on Breloom and Drapion and then proceed to wipe your team out with Bullet Punch which everything dies to except for Steelix who is outsped and takes about 95% average sooo he'll fall to that pretty easily =[

Why are you running a Sash on Ninjask? SR wrecks it's Sash and does 50% to it. Plus Ninjask is metagame weak, I can't really see what it is doing since it'll probably die before it can pass anything =/ I'd honestly replace with with something like Sleep Talker Rotom-A. Heat form can work since Scizor usually run from that and it'll also help your Gyarados weak. Try this >>> Ninjask.

Rotom-H @ Leftovers
Nature : Bold
EV : 252 HP / 160 Def / 96 SpD
- Discharge / Thunderbolt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Rest
- Sleep Talk

Put Focus Blast > Signal Beam, it gives you the greatest coverage plus lets you smack Blissey and Ttar around.

Good luck with this team.

Sunny Day is for Weathers only...the sash keeps Ninjask alive to Baton his moves easy Steelix is a Bait to kill things with its death...remember this team was made for my made up clauses when you try to be so harsh...the metagame is hard to learn when your beginning to get into it...and i dont like return visits from every OU poke

 

[wolf]

Sunny Day is for Weathers only...

It reduces Water-type attacks so that is why he mentioned it. Rotom Heat will help with a lot of your weaknesses, and Ninjask doesn't work that well without a Taunt lead like Azelf or Aerodactyl, or if you use him as a lead instead. :[

the sash keeps Ninjask alive to Baton his moves easy

You don't understand, Focus Sash doesn't work. Like, once Stealth Rock is up, the effect, survive an attack that would OHKO at full health, is eliminated. Stealth Rock breaks Focus Sash's effect because you don't start at full health. That is why it is only used on leads because they don't switch into Stealth Rock.

 

[Pokedra]

Sunny Day is for Weathers only...the sash keeps Ninjask alive to Baton his moves easy Steelix is a Bait to kill things with its death...remember this team was made for my made up clauses when you try to be so harsh...the metagame is hard to learn when your beginning to get into it...and i dont like return visits from every OU poke

Using Sunny Day on Ninjask won't hinder weather teams though, they'll just kill you and setup their weather again and since Ninjask takes 50% damage from SR he can only come in twice. Most weather teams have 3-4 with their weather changing move. I don't see how it'll stop their team...lol

But Sash is destroyed by Stealth Rock, once you switch in you'll lose half your health because of it so it's basically useless. At least use Lefties if you don't want to change. I'm just saying Rotom-H would be so much better for this team then Ninjask.

I'm not trying to be harsh at all, I'm trying to help =]

But the before mentioned Pokemon will destroy your team if you don't put something to check them. Ninjask is doing nothing, since he isn't a lead he can only come in once and if he tries to setup with SD something will attack him and destroy him. Just consider swapping him =[