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joyce : the fluffy pirate~

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    okay , this is my very first comic , and I think of myself I did pretty well, actually :3

    :: TeenagePokemonLife ::

    It goes about a young girl named Joyce (yes , just one piece of orginality , I know) that starts off a journey because she's moneyless x3

    Here are the first ones :
    1. Broke (Damn tv!)
    2. MOVE_ON!
    3. In pepperspray we trust!


    read & give comments so I can improve~
     
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    You should try and keep the text boxes inside their respective panels, and not let other panel's overlap text boxes.
     
    [ray.z] said:
    You should try and keep the text boxes inside their respective panels, and not let other panel's overlap text boxes.
    Click to expand...

    Ow.. I'm sorry, I just finished the update , and I'm too lazy to work that away x3

    But I'll promise I'll work on it next time...



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    Nice comic Joyce, I like it so far, although I dont like the text try verdana 7 it looks pretty, and I think all the panels should be the same size, I dont mind the speech bubble going out of the panel (I do that too) but the panels should be the same size. Keep up the good work otherwise.
     
    Call me crazy but this sounds kind of like Blueguy. Well, the beginning at least. Otherwise it is an entirely good comic and I hope to see it some more.
     
    i realy realy like this comic that you have made .
     
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