The 1337est Mary-Sue Parody EVER!!! (ROFLLOLOMGWTF!)

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    Welcome to the worst Pokemon fanfiction EVER! I really should stop doing that XD I won't explain any more, except for the fact that the main writing is in normal font, the picky reviewer's comments are in brackets, and the Pokemon's comments are in italics. That should explain it hopefully. And I look forward to getting frosty's reviews :P Enjoy... or cringe - one of the two XD Oh, and all spelling and grammatical mistakes are intentional by the way. XD


    The 1337est Mary-Sue Parody EVER!!! (ROFLLOLOMGWTF!)


    Chapter 1: Teh 1337est Opening EVER!


    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily woke up to a bright (clich?d) summers day, only to find that it was his tenth birthday an he would be late for to collect his Pok?mon rom Professor <Insert Random Tree Here>. He was also the son of Ash Ketchup and Misty Waterlily and dreamed of becoming the bestest Pok?mon Master ever ever! Quickly (and without any description from the author), Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily ran straight from his own house to the house of Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> that was convenitently exactly 500 steps away rom his own house and labratory.

    As he burst in through the door (with still no word from the author on what he was wearing or what he even remotely looked like), Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily looked at Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> and his super-mega-ultra-supreme-most evil-arch-nemething, (the author must be a precocious six-year-old, or an IQ-insufficient 13-year-old), SPENCER!!! *Cue evil music*

    (Whilst still not knowing what SPENCER or Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> looks like, the author finally manages to put some dialogue in? thank goodness for that at least):

    ?Here you go SPENCER,? Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> said (with no adverb or anything? this author is driving me crazy) to SPENCER, ?Your new Rayquaza, here?s a million trillion gazillion PokeDollars, your PokeDex, and 6 new Pok?balls.?

    ?Aw? Aren?t you going to give me another 5 Pok?mon like you did to the other kid that came in here?? SPENCER said (again with the lack of adverbs? woe is me) to Professor <Insert Random Tree Here>.

    ?Now now my boy, you may be my grandson, but that doesn?t mean I?m going to have favourites. I know you can do well anyways.? Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> said. (He didn?t even put a comma at the end? what is the world coming to?)

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily ran up to the Professor and screamed, ?I wanna Pok?mon and I wanna wan NOW!!!? (Great? we have a spoilt arrogant brat for the hero, how original.)

    ?Don?t worry, young Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily, I have 3 fine Pok?mon for you. Just take your pick from Weedle, Missingno, or Mew.?

    ?I?ll go for Mew.?

    ?Well, there you go. Here?s your Mew. Take good care of it. Here?s a million trillion gazillion PokeDollars, your PokeDex, and 6 new Pok?balls.? (Shouldn?t the Professor at least hand over the Mew? Oh? I?m just talking to a brick wall here.)

    ?Hey SPENCER!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily shouted sa SPENCER was walking out of the door (This doesn?t sound good? although he did use shouted instead of ?said?. Maybe there is hope in this world.)

    ?I challenge you to a battle!? (Or maybe not?)

    ?I accept!? (Here we go? one clich?d completely one-sided battle coming up) ?Rayquaza, I choose you!?

    ?Mew, I choose you.? (I?m not even going to bother anymore? wake me up when this is over)

    ?Rayquaza, use Tackle!?

    ?Mew, use Super-Mega-Ultra-Uber-Attack-of-Death!? (What the??)

    Rayquaza fainted. Mew gained 5 bazillion experience points. Mew grew to Level 2.

    ?Yay, we won! Great battle Mew!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily yelled and glomped Mew.

    ?Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!? SPENCER said (and we?re back to ?said?), ?I?m going to become the bestest bestest BESTEST EVER Pokemon Master in history. Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily, we shall meet again."

    And with that, SPENCER and Bulbasaur stormed out of the lab. Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily also said goodbye to Professor <Insert Random Tree Here> and headed off to the first Route (We don?t even know which region or anything? just great.)

    Eventually (with no description whatsoever again), Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily arrived in Oldale Town, (so we?re in Hoenn are we?) only to find that there was a Groudon attacking the town.

    ?Oh no! There?s a Groudon attacking the town!? (How on earth does this loser know what a Groudon looks like, or even what one is? This is just madness!)

    ?Mew! Use Uber-Attack-That-Brings-All-Pokemon-Down-To-1HP!?

    Groudon used Growl. But it failed!

    ?Pok?ball GO!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily threw a Pokeball and Groudon was caught. (What a surprise)

    Instantly, as if by magic, the town returned to its normal state, with flowers growing, birds singing, (readers retching?) and people acting all happy and nice. The mayor of Oldale made Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily the Bestest Most Wonderful Person Ever. Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily said goodbye to Oldale and onwards to Petalburg. (Finally? the chapter?s over isn?t it?)

    Meanwhile, inside the Pok?balls:

    ?I feel so sorry for you,? Groudon whispered through the Pokeball to Mew, ?I had a chance to escape, but you were forced to go with this idiot.?

    ?Don?t worry about it. Before he captured you, he told me to use Super-Mega something or other. Do you know any attacks that start with that?? Mew sighed as she floated around in her cell.

    ?Nope, I really feel for you,? Groudon sighed, as he floated around in his pink ball of matter.

    ?I just ended up using a Psychic? although it still only just made the Rayquaza faint,? Mew sighed again.

    ?Well, at least I can get through this with another Pokemon,? Mew said regaining some form of confidence.

    ?Yeah, I suppose it?ll be good to have some company around to get through this,? Groudon whispered, ?Who knew misery on earth came in the form of a ten-year-old boy.?
     
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    God, I always get a kick out of reading these. They're so stupid they're hilarous.

    What Bard's Tale does for RPGs, this does for Pokemon Fan Fictions. Keep it up, I like your style. I would have liked a little more to it, but still, it was pretty good nonetheless.
     
    O.O

    This gives me a Deja Vu... you don't happen to have made a previous version of this, do you?
     
    NP - Thanks. I've read so many n00b fics on other boards that I'd thought I'd post one of my own. XD

    Dragonfree - I haven't... but I did take a lot of inspiration of Dias' fic of a similar genre back on Serebii. The general storyline is with inspiration from his fic, but the characters and dialogue is all original. I hope you like it though. ^_^
     
    cliche. =)

    Lol though...this was funny, particulary the one with Professor (Insert a random tree name here) and Ash's extremely long name stuff. XD As dragonfree said, it also gave me deja vu.

    I don't comment on parodies that well...but nice job! When you mentioned it in the fanfiction lounge- Frosty knows parodies...never seen him rating it though.

    Keep it up with the next chapter. XD
     
    LMAO!!! Even though the 'readers' comment that there has been no description of what the main character looks like, with the name 'Ashton Kucher' in there, I can't help but picture the actor well-known for playing Kelso in That 70's Show. Anyway, love the way you poke fun at all the stupid n00b fics, especially how so many of them seem to take place in the future under the assumption that Ash and Misty marry (you wouldn't believe how much I hate Pokeshipping). I look forward to a second chapter.
     
    Second chapter will be up either tonight or tomorrow, as my computer is almost fixed...

    Kadabra - I just c/ped most of the time XD Saves a lot of time.

    Expect many more spelling and grammar errors in the next chapter :P
     
    Lol, very cleverly done, MCD ^^
    "Groudon used Growl. But it failed!" XD
     
    *cowers in a corner* When I write a parody, I get four replies to three chapters. When you write a parody, you get seven replies to one chapter. No fair. :(

    Either way, the second chapter is still not here yet, even though you said it would be up yesterday at the latest...
     
    Thanks everyone ^_^ Next chapter should be up in a couple of hours, I just have to write out the craptastic battle sequence and then I'm done. I don't think this one will be as funny as the first chapter, but oh well XD

    Edit - Sorry Dragonfree, MS Word kinda died on me yesterday night, so I had to start Chap 2 all over again. And about the comments... er... *cowers* XD
     
    Well, here's Chapter 2. I don't think it's as funny as Chap 1, but I still think it's a good parody of n00b fics. As always, normal font is the main storyline, (text in brackets is the picky reviewers comments) and text in italics is the Pokemon speaking. Enjoy, or cringe, or do something. XD

    Chapter 2: Wot reely hapens in Pok?mon batels



    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily (Here we go again?) wass on his way too Petalburg City and he was just about to enter the city wen he saw a littel boy of brown hair, five foooot six inches, with an Abra, Nidoran Femail, Kanghaskhanaha?s baby, Mario, Mewtwo and Weedle woo was sittin by the road crying on a rock, he also lived with two parents who wurked as bank mangers in Petalburg City and his ageing old grandmother who had a Persian cat and once fort in the great was of 1976. (o_O That must have been the longest sentence ever?)

    He was also a Pisces. (And that must have been the shortest paragraph?)

    ?Hi, what?s your name??

    ?Hi, my name?s Tim.?

    ?Let?s be friends.?

    ?OK.?

    ?More conversation spam? (I didn?t even put that in? the author did.)

    ?I?m going to Petalburg City to challenge the Gym Leader and become the bestest bestest bestest Pok?mon League Champion EVER! And I have to beat my super-mega-ultra-supreme-arch-nemething SPENCER! How about you?? (Thanks for telling us your life story?)

    ?I want to be the world?s bestest bestest Pok?mon breeder like all the other characters that follow the bratty hero around in crappy fanfictions like these.? (He must read a lot?)

    ?OMGROFLXDXDXDWTF133713371337133713371337LMAOLAMOMEXICANHULADANCELETSDOTHATAGAIN!!!:P:P:P? (Now that really is conversation spam.)

    ?ROFLROFLROFLWHO?SYOURFAVOURITEMEMBEROUTOFDESTINY?SCHILD133713371337XDXDXD:P^_^RANDOMSMILEYSLOLLOL!!!? (o.o *cough*)

    ?Do you wanna grab a pizza or a drink or something to fill up parts of this chapter?? (We don?t even know who?s talking. This is lunacy!)

    ?OK.? Said Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily (Thanks? I suppose)

    -Pointless brake within paragraffs to indikate pizza eatin moshuns-

    After Tim and Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily had eaten their pizza and drunk their drink, they decided to walk all the 547 steps to the Petalburg Gym. They entered the Petalburg City Gym and saw the Petalburg City Gym Leader Norman (Who is a ball of nothingness thanks to the author that expects us all to have played the games or watched episodes of the cartoon that haven?t been broadcast outside of Japan.)

    ?Norman, I wanna challenge you and become the bestest bestest EVER person to have beaten you EVER! I know you have a Vigoroth and two Slakings of which the second one will like to use Focus Punch a lot but I know how to beat you so can I have a battle for the Plain Badge?? (He must have played RSE?)

    ?OK son,? (SON? What kind of sick Gym Leader is he? Ash Ketchup and Misty Waterlily? wait, the author can?t even write Ketchup or Waterflower. Woe oh woe is me) ?I know you?ve just started your journey, but you aren?t strong enough to fight me yet. Come back to me after you?ve grown stronger. OK?? (o_O? He too must worship his copy of Ruby)

    ?OK, Dad,? (WTF? Oh god? now I?m sounding like this crappy author. AAAAGH!) ?I?ll go off and fight a further four Gym Leaders in cities that follow the Pok?mon games exactly.?

    ?Good boy, son.? (My head?s about to explode)

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily and Tim lefft the Petalburg Gym and heded for the nex root where they saw a Charizard asleep on the grass. (Oh my god? description! Completely vague? but it?s there.)

    ?Great Here comes some n00b trainer that?s probably going to catch me because the author can?t be bothered or doesn?t know how to write a half-decent battle sequence? My life is over,? The Charizard sighed nervously. (It took the words right out of my mouth.)

    Tim: ?Wow! It?s a Charizard? (Oh god? now they?re in script!)

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily: ?I?m going to catch it so easily because I?m the bestest bestest Pokemon trainer EVER, and I can catch everything and anything!? (But you can?t get your head out of the door for some reason. I wonder why?)

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily: ?Mew, I choose YOU!?

    Mew: (thinking) ?Oh god, do I have to be in script as well??

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily: ?Mew! Use Uber-Attack-That-Brings-All-Pokemon-Down-To-1HP!?

    Mew: (thinking)?I refuse to be part of this madness. At least stop writing my parts in script!!!? (You go girl!)

    Charizard: And while you?re at it, can you skip the script parts for me as well?

    ?I?m so sorry about this? AND THAT?S BETTER!? Mew whispered, then shouted telepathically to Charizard.

    ?Don?t worry, I once was in this fic where the n00b trainer tried to physically wrestle me to try and catch me. How about you?? Charizard whispered.

    ?I got given to this one my a Professor called <Insert Random Tree Here>. That bad enough??

    ?Ouch. You win. What do you want me to do?? Charizard whispered to the feline.

    ?Well, I?m supposed to attack you with this super-hyper-mega crap. Basically, I?m going to Flash you, you fall down dead, and King Loser over there will throw a Pok?ball and catch you. Does that sound OK?? Mew asked, whilst the obviously oblivious Ashton (At least these segments of the story don?t go to great lengths to write out ?King Loser?s? real name) and less-than-oblivious Tim looked on in this conversation between the two Pokemon.

    Mew used Uber-Attack-That-Brings-All-Pokemon-Down-To-1HP. Charizard nearly fainted! (Sure he did) Mew gained infinity experience points. Mew grew to Level 2.5 (How could Mew even gain experience points when Charizard didn?t even faint? Why am I even asking these questions anymore? I?m talking to a brick wall.)

    ?Pok?ball GO!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily shouted as he through the Pok?ball at the Charizard. 1?2?3? Charizard was caught!?

    ?Yay! I caught a Charizard!!!!!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily said. (And we?re back to said. Well, I?m not getting my hopes up or anything.)

    Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily nad Tim warked a cupple of meters when suddenly Jessie and James rom Team Roket jumped down from the skie. (Oh Lord? And just when I thought it couldn?t get any worse. The author?s probably going to go to great lengths in his or her vast ten-year-old-mind to write out the whole theme tune. Just brilliant.)

    Jessie: Prepare for trouble (And we?ve gone back into script? *sigh*)

    James: And make it double

    Jessie: To protect the world from devastation

    James: To unite all peoples within our nation

    Jessie: To denounce the evils of truth and love

    James: To extend our reach to the stars above

    Jessie: Jessie

    James: James

    Jessie: Team Rocket blast off at the speed of light

    James: Surrender now, or prepare to fight

    Meowth: Meowth, that?s right (Thank God that?s over)

    ?A ha ha ha ha ha, we?ve come to steal your Pikachu and show it to our boss,? Jessie said. (What the? first it steals the game storyline, now it steals the anim?? This is sinking deeper and deeper, although I wouldn?t expect anything less of this chapter so far?)

    ?Go Arbok!? Jessie said.

    ?Go Weezing!? James said. (Wouldn?t they send out Seviper and Cacnea if this was in Hoenn? Why do I even bother?)

    ?Go Charizard and Groudon!? Ashton Kucher Prometheus Chromosome Ketchup Waterlily said.

    ?Oh god, we?re out again?? Arbok sighed wearily as she saw her two opponents, ?Hey, you?re not Pikachu!?

    ?No? you?re not,? Weezing coughed out, bellowing lots of fumes whilst he was at it.?

    ?Of course not,? Charizard shouted angrily, ?Do we look yellow, furry, and full of crap??

    ?No, but it?s just in all the other fics we?ve been in,? Arbok sighed again,

    ?All we do is fight Pikachu over and over and over. We kind of expect it now, that?s all.?

    ?It just becomes so repetitive,? Weezing muttered, still bellowing out toxic fumes, ?It?s the same routine every time. We come out, Pikachu gives us an electric shock and we get sent flying to who knows where. No matter who the author is, it happens in every chapter we?re in.?

    ?Ouch. You should see a therapist or something,? Groudon said anxiously, ?You could have some sort of nervous breakdown if you keep carrying on like this.?

    ?We?re both seeing a Hypno psychiatrist,? Weezing muttered to the two Pok?mon, ?She says we?ll both be suffering from schizophrenia in two years time.?

    ?You poor things,? Groudon said sympathetically,? But I think we?d better get back to battling. Our owners are wanting us to fight to the death or something sad and stupid.?

    ?Just make us both faint. It?s the only way we can receive our medication,? Arbok sighed wearily again.?

    ?We?ll make it quick and easy,? Charizard smiled, ?It?s been nice meeting you guys anyways.?

    ?Yeah, have a nice time in therapy,? Groudon smiled as well.

    ?Charizard, Groudon, Use Super-Mega-Ultra-Uber-Attack-of-Death!? (And we?re back to whatever twisted reality this fic calls home.?

    Mew and Groudon used Super-Mega-Ultra-Uber-Attack-of-Death! Arbok and Weezing fainted. Mew gained infinity plus 1 experience point. Mew grew to Level Pi. Groudon gained 1 experience point. Groudon grew to Level 9999999.

    ?Team Rocket?s blasting off again!? Team Rocket yelled as they blasted of into the sunset. (Clich?d beyond extremes)
    And once again, the day is saved, thanks to? CHARIZARD AND GROUDON!!! (o_O That?s not even Pok?mon related. But who cares, the chapter?s over anyways)
     
    LMAO!!! I noticed you poked fun at lousy script. Speaking of things done the opposite from my fic, I have another thing you could use in your fic that I see quite often in others: cultural inaccuracy or cultural confusion. I've seen some fics try to make it seem like the setting is Japan (which is actually a rough equivalent of what Kanto, Jouto, and Houen are), and yet, they never seem to do their homework in terms of culture and such. The most they'll make the characters do is read manga and speak like an otaku ("That is so kawaiiiii~!"), and despite trying (and failing) to make them seem Japanese, they make them eat nothing but hamburgers and never describe a slight hint of anything remotely Japanese in the scenery.
     
    It kept making me think of Dias's parody which kinda ruined it, but meh. I liked the Pok?mon talking to each other, especially Arbok and Weezing. My favorite line was this, though:


    ?I want to be the world?s bestest bestest Pok?mon breeder like all the other characters that follow the bratty hero around in crappy fanfictions like these.?
    Click to expand...

    Nice job.
     
    Yamato-san - I'll bear that in mind, as I too have seen the Japanese resemblance within n00b crap such as this.
    Dragonfree - Sorry for making it so familiar to Dias' fic, but it was his fic that inspired me (although it was pruned from SPP about a year ago XD) I don't think he got as far as Chapter 5, so all chapters from then shall be truly original XD
     
    I'm glad that you noticed that. That too was also intentional, as I've read some fics which don't even have the right Pokemon attacking the opponent. Well spotted. Well done. ^_^
     
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    LOL! That's hilarious! I love pointless fan-fics (I write them all the time)! :P Nice job, love it!
     
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