The adventures of June!

Frostbite

Frostbite

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    Hi! Well I decided to make a comic series and so here it is. Here is the plot, June, now recently just turned 10, is trying to become a pokemon master and beat the Kanto elite 4.

    Well enough talking here is the comic! Please review! ^_^

    Update: Issue #2 is now up!

    Season 1

    June gets her starter pokemon!
    Sneaky, Sneaky!



    Credits
    -Koopaul [Prof. Oak's and Prof. Oak sprites]
    -armidilloHD [Dragoon sprites]
    -Nitrus [Alex sprites]
     
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    Nice I like how you use charsets to instead of mini sprites.
     
    Hmm... I don't really let people use my other self but, okay.. May I be in it?

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    You can redo the pokemon team if you want to. BUT KEEP THE NOCTOWL! ^_^ anywho great comic I give it 9/10. I first didn't know who was talking at the last strip. But, I found it out ^_^ why not use like likes?
     
    Yeah, about this comic. It's uhh...it's visually nice looking, but what's the deal? I mean, it's clearly not a humorous comic, and it's not exactly riveting in terms of story. You have to give your strip something that will make it interesting, because right now, it's anything but.

    4/10

    A strip can't be held together by clean images and predictable events.
     
    XD It's a very cool comic! It has a lot of mystery and some humor. I think you might want to make a some sort of problem, like in the next town, otherwise things will get boring, But it's really great so far! I hope to see more (lol I'll join later XD)
     
    A comic doesn't exactly need humor some time it can be thrilling action like pokemon the anime which in my opinion doesn't make me laugh that often.Its a good comic I wanna see #3.
     
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