The fire burning

[fallen_angel]

I hope you like this is my 5th poem and counting. :D

The fire burning

My fire burning deep inside
its to much to contain
and when it comes lashing out
no one can survive

The only survivor
is the one who started it all
I don't want no sympathy
I don't want no pain

The fire burning deep inside
makes me so insane
it lashes out to friends & family
its something none can contain

The fire burning deep inside
its part of who I am
this is my temper this is my pain
its the fire burning deep inside
its just to much to contain​

 

[Cybex Mewtwo]

This poem has an....intensive air about it.....and I like it. very nice work here.

 

[Smarties-chan]

You're a real poet so far I have only read two of your poems and I have to say they're great *goes of to read the rest of them*

 

[Esupio]

OMG A POEM ABOUT FIRE i love it pure burnieness :P

 

[Envy]

Once again my best friend,It's wonderful!!I looooovvvvedd it,it has so much anger in it and hate in it!!!!!Your very good at poetey!^^

 

[fallen_angel]

Thanks! :D Its about me. I tried to put as much of my feeling into it as I can.

 

[pink-tiger]

Yeah!I know what feeling its______!
Hee!But!I LOVE IT!

 

[fallen_angel]

Haha. :D Yeah I know you know.