The fire burning

fallen_angel

Sabaku No Gaara
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    I hope you like this is my 5th poem and counting. :D

    The fire burning

    My fire burning deep inside
    its to much to contain
    and when it comes lashing out
    no one can survive

    The only survivor
    is the one who started it all
    I don't want no sympathy
    I don't want no pain

    The fire burning deep inside
    makes me so insane
    it lashes out to friends & family
    its something none can contain

    The fire burning deep inside
    its part of who I am
    this is my temper this is my pain
    its the fire burning deep inside
    its just to much to contain​
     
    This poem has an....intensive air about it.....and I like it. very nice work here.
     
    You're a real poet so far I have only read two of your poems and I have to say they're great *goes of to read the rest of them*
     
    Once again my best friend,It's wonderful!!I looooovvvvedd it,it has so much anger in it and hate in it!!!!!Your very good at poetey!^^
     
    Thanks! :D Its about me. I tried to put as much of my feeling into it as I can.
     
    Yeah!I know what feeling its______!
    Hee!But!I LOVE IT!
     
    Haha. :D Yeah I know you know.
     
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