B-Baller
My ballin' is br00tal
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Rap's a kind of poem right? *checks teh thread* Yup it is. This is, like, mah 2nd rap. My first one's on my campaign webiste. This is a rap about the melting heat of the sun, and what should you do if you're really annoyed with the heat.
Ready? Here it goes!
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Gee, its hot, I need a Coke
My friend says "If you want one, ask the old bloke!"
But the bloke on the shop said "Endure the heat!"
Then how am I supposed to endure the heat?
That sounds like nothin' but when I thought about it I scratched my noggin
The sun is burning, 'bout 50 degrees or so
I felt like I'm melting, but I said to myself, "So?"
I kept telling myself to endure the heat
But I cannot keep up no more, I stood up my seat!
I swiped a dollar and went to the counter to buy my Coke, and asked the old bloke....
"Why can't I endure the heat, man?" I asked.
The bloke said "Its a special thing I call a task."
I scratched my head in confusion, maybe the bloke's just an illusion
Next time I go out, I'm bringing some sunscreen! Oh, and a hat too, and maybe some glasses........
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Pretty crappy, I know.remember I'm sort of a newbie at this so please give me ways to improve this instead of just saying it sucks (cos i already know it sucks).
Ready? Here it goes!
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Gee, its hot, I need a Coke
My friend says "If you want one, ask the old bloke!"
But the bloke on the shop said "Endure the heat!"
Then how am I supposed to endure the heat?
That sounds like nothin' but when I thought about it I scratched my noggin
The sun is burning, 'bout 50 degrees or so
I felt like I'm melting, but I said to myself, "So?"
I kept telling myself to endure the heat
But I cannot keep up no more, I stood up my seat!
I swiped a dollar and went to the counter to buy my Coke, and asked the old bloke....
"Why can't I endure the heat, man?" I asked.
The bloke said "Its a special thing I call a task."
I scratched my head in confusion, maybe the bloke's just an illusion
Next time I go out, I'm bringing some sunscreen! Oh, and a hat too, and maybe some glasses........
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Pretty crappy, I know.remember I'm sort of a newbie at this so please give me ways to improve this instead of just saying it sucks (cos i already know it sucks).