The Pokemon in Pokemon Revenge

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    The pokemon in my fic Pokemon Revenge tend to be similar to the CG Photorealistic Creatures in most movies today, like star wars creatures
     
    Cool, that's a very nice take! :D Photorealistic Pok?mon always interest me ^_^ I like the way you've used a lineless style to heighten the realism! The shading seems a little confused around his arm and chest, but overall it's a really good pic! Keep up the good work! *hugs!*
     
    very very good indeed!
    i think that you should darken the lineart in the middle first, because the overall picture is dark and you need some balance..
    the colours in the picture should almost always be lighter than the lineart (except in certain occasions)
    your light source is also a bit undefined..
    for example on one leg.. the light is coming from the left, and on the other, the light is shining from the right..
    so it's a bit confusing there..
    there should always be a more dominant light force.. it gives more of an impact with the picture and gives of a sense of balance
    (ex, equal amout of light, and equal amount of dark)

    i love the use of colour though :3 and the highlights are magnificent
    the compostition is great and the idea is great aswell!!
    keep up the awesome work!!
    and i hope i didn't insult you,
    i'm just trying to offer advice

    :3 thanks for listening and i hope to see more art from you in the future!!
    ~kura
     
    Awesome work dude! I can see you worked really hard on this; it strikes me as a Tyranitar XD I like the realism and the shading, though I would consider shading a tad more on the spikes on its back and perhaps make the scales stand out a tad more by shading, because they look a tad plain. But other than my nit picking, I would say that you have allot of potential ^_-

    Keep up the good work!
     
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