The reason why I'm such a sweetie. ^0^

Jeremy

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    Well sweeties, I'd got bored I made a poem. ^0^

    ~My Reason~

    You're my reason why I get up everyday
    To face my challenges that come my way
    And everytime I see you smile
    It makes the day to seem all worthwhile
    And every moment as we kiss
    Are the sweet moments of bliss
    That's the sweet treasure I'll surely miss
    As the day begins to end
    And the daily cycle begins again
    I lay at night dreaming about you
    Knowing these dreams will come true
    I know we'll be together for all eternity
    We'll be together forever, just you and me

    Well, what ya thinkie? ^0^
     
    i like this one even better than the last ^ ^ i like how this one is more about a relationship ^ ^ 9/10
     
    It's cute XD. But you didn't put any "sweeties" in it! XD
     
    Great job! ^^ I like it better then the last one as well! 8/10
    Keep practicing! =D
     
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