The remembered lullaby~

[Kishijoten]

The remembered Lullaby

The gentle tone began to sing a memorable song that had
made you cry. "Nabutoshi
why are you so red?."

As the melody plays in
a sweet soft tone. Only you
can hear the memorable voice.
" is it because
you had a sad dream last
night".
As the solo voice begins to
sing every single note drifts
in your dream.
"Is it because you were
searching' for who had disappeared"?
When the voice had stopped
tears had falled the lullaby
was silent as you cried
through the night.

Even though the song
was never heard. Memories
began to flow again, and
since that day the lullaby
had recalled your past
that used to buried under
a cloud of death.

 

[Vespinus]

It's lovely, well done. I applaud your poetic prowess.

 

[Kishijoten]

It's lovely, well done. I applaud your poetic prowess.

Thank you for the compliment. I mixed it with some song lyrics as well.

 

[Kishijoten]

What what What.

I'm not a person to say "Omg your poem is awesome" unless it really is. Please distinguish which stanza is which; that giant "paragraph" of a stanza is sorta ruining everything.

Well I'm not a person who corrects everything.But, in case you didn't know. Everybody has their own way of writing poetry and they have their own ideas too. I have my way of writing poetry and you have your way. There's no rule in poetry that it can't be wrote in thousands of way.