The Revenge

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    CHAPTER 1 ASH?S BIG SECERT REVEALED

    ?Hey look there is a lake,? Brock said. ?Finally? Ash said before taking off his clothes except his boxers. After awhile a head came up from the water. ?Hey look a Vaporeon,? Misty shouted happy the Vaporeon looked around and saw Misty taking out a poke-ball, and was getting ready to trough it at the water pokemon. It then started to get worried and quickly into the water. Then Ash?s head poked up out of the water. ?Hey Ash did you see a Vaporeon swim by you?? Misty asked. ?Umm ? What Vaporeon?? Ash asked in return response. Then a claw came out of nowhere and graved Pikachu. Then Team Rocket came out of from the bushes holding Pikachu in a metal cage. ?Give me back Pikachu now? Ash said. ?Never and it is now to use the pokemon the Boss gave us? Jessie said as she and James threw to poke-balls. Out of the Poke-balls came two Vaporeons. Ash looked a bit shocked. ?Use Water Gun on the twerp? Jessie said as the water pokemon fired powerful blast of water at Ash sending him flying into the forest. ?Now to go back to the Boss,? said Meowth. All of a sudden out of the forest came a Vaporeon that fired a Hydro Pump at team rocket. ?Looks like team rocket blasting off again? they shouted dropping the poke-balls for the two Vaporeon. The third Vaporeon ran off into the forest a second later Ash came out. He looked at the two Vaporeons then he ran up to the two water pokemon. ?I missed you two so much,? Ash said hugging the pokemon. ?What do you mean?? Misty asked. ?I hoped I won?t have to tell every one? Ash said. ?Tell us what?? Brock asked. ?These two Vaporeons are my parents? Ash said in replied. ?But that means you are a? Misty said before Ash interrupted her. ?Yes a Vaporeon? Ash said before changing right before their eyes into a Vaporeon. ?Since you are a Vaporeon I am going to capture you? Misty said but then an Espeon jumped in front of ash that had just turned back into human. ?Espy? ash said as he hugged the espeon. ?Who is espy?? Brock asked. ?Espy is my in human terms girlfriend but by pokemon terms she is my Mate to be? ash said.
     
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    omg learn to use commas and periods. i didnt read that because its too hard to read.
     
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