The story of Viper Mitchell

[EKANSSSSSSSSSS]

hey everyone...its me snakey...and i am come to you with my first fic EVER! so if you want to be a blunt as you want to be...but just give me some feed back on what i should do to fix it.

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The story of Viper Mitchell


As the morning sun rises to the world, we find are selfs in the world of Pokemon. Our hero is a man named Viper who lives his life as a pokemon breeder. He takes care of a whole farm of Pokemon and well as other peoples Pokemon. He has always had a love of Pokemon, ever sense he was a kid. And it was because of his dad that he has had this house and farm. He is about 6 Feet tall and has black hair with a thick purple stripe in the middle. So we start off at about 8 AM for everyones breakfast.

As the alarm sounds, he slams the snooze button hoping it will go away as he does every morning. As it sounds 5 minutes later he hits the snooze button again, rolling over as he hears a familliar sound. And then it hits him; the sound is his door slamming open and something jumping into his bed. As he is more woken up he sees his Ekans a big 20 foot long purple snake in his bed reminding him to wake up. "Ekans you silly snake, you never let me sleep do you?" He says as he grins and hugs his happy Ekans, and Ekans hugs him back.

So he puts on his morning work clothes, fixes his purple and black hair, brushes his teeth, and gets ready for everyones breakfast. He fills up his backpack with about 10 LBS of pokemon food that he makes every night with care. He pulls out ekans's food and sets it next to her. "Here ya go sweety, eat up" Ekans with her happy grin repiles the best she can "Ekansssss ekaekansssss" As he pets her he goes off to feed the rest of the pokemon.

He goes to the small lake in the farm first. He sets some more food down and calls out. "Lapras! ..Come on girl..it's breakfast!" He ponders a bit, "She is normally awake for breakfast", he takes a small walk around the lake to see if he can find her. He thinks "she could just be underwater", so he shrugs and goes to give everyone else their food.

He walks more to the center of the farm and gives out a loud howl like a dog. He stands ready for something to happen, looking around for something. Then he gives out another howl, and before he can finish it he gets pounded down to the ground by an Arcanine. He giggles a bit and says "I didn't even see you this time Niney, your Extreme Speed attack is getting faster and faster every day!" He gets up, pets the Arcanine, and feeds him his breakfast, His cell phone starts to ring.

"Viper's pokehouse" he finds out it's his good friend Mina on the phone.

"Good morning Mina, how ya doing?"

"Have you seen your Lapras today?" Mina asks.

Vipers heart somewhat jumped. "No I haven't. Why do you ask?"

"I saw some guys with a Lapras in the back of a pickup near my house, and it looked a lot like yours" Mina explains.

Vipers eyes widen, and he mutters "Are you sure?"

"It was very much like yours, that's why I am calling." Mina sadly says.

Viper almost drops his cell, he was upset. "Do you know were they went?" He yells.

"I got their licence plate number if you want to, because it looked a bit wrong to see a Lapras like yours in someones truck"

"Thank you mina!" he happilly says, "I'll be over after I feed the rest of the Pokemon." He hangs up the phone, then gets on the back of the Arcanine and commands "Come on Niney, we have to do this fast" He quickly feeds the rest of his pokemon, then rushes to Mina's house.

What will become of our hero?

To be continued.

i want to thank ~*Minako*~ for gettin me to start writeing *hugs* <3


i have chapter 2 done...and i will post it when i get a fue reviews ^_^ it is longer then chapter 1...so keep that in mind...and just be as honist as you can be

 

[emeraldslay]

****, that's good. Good job! I want to read more! Some grammar mistakes, but except for that it's great!

 

[espeon and umbreon]

It's quiet good story. Bit short though. That doesn't matter anyway. Well keep it up!

 

[EKANSSSSSSSSSS]

well...i cant wait any longer ^_^ im just going to post chapter 2


As we last left our hero he was on his way to his friend Mina?s house. Mina has been a very good friend of Viper ever since they went to school together. He has always had a small crush on her after high school. He can't help but fall in love with her green eyes and her short pink hair, but it?s an unrequited love, for she has eyes for someone else, but never the less he will always be her friend.

As he is jogging to Mina?s house he starts to hear a noise behind him. He slows down and then looks around to see nothing but bushes and the road. So he just turns back around and keeps going. But then the sound is getting louder. He somewhat turns his head to look behind him and he stills sees
nothing. But then something in his mind clicks.
?Ekans! Come on show your self. I know you?re here.? he calls, and then some bushes rustle and he sees his big snake friend. ?Aww, it's ok sweety. If you wanted to come with me you know I will always bring you.? As Ekans face lit up, Ekans glomps Viper to the ground. ?I know, I know Ekans, I love you to? as Viper pets Ekans?s big purple and yellow scales, they hug as true friends do. So now with Viper and one of his best friends, Ekans, they rush off to Mina?s house.

As Viper and Ekans come up to a big two storey house, he walks up to the front door, rings the bell and waits with Ekans at his side. ?It's been a while since you have seen Mina, ehh buddy?? Ekans nods his head, happy. As the door opens up we see Mina in her favorite jeans and sport top. Viper
does a small gulp of joy as he sees her. ?Hi, Mina thank you for everything? as he puts his arms out for a hug from her, Mina screams out;
?EKANS! I have not seen you in a while? she kneels down to pet Ekans, and Viper puts one of his hand behind his back, trying to look like nothing happened. ?What I think we should do is go talk to officer jenny about this, she might be able to help us,? explained Mina. Viper and Mina both nod to each other as they go off to Officer Jenny?s police station.

As they get to Officer Jenny?s station and walk in the self opening doors one of the Officers stops Viper and tells him. ?I'm sorry, son, you're going to have to put your Pok?mon back in thier Pok?balls to come in.? Viper somewhat sighs as he remembers that he never truly caught Ekans. He found him on the farm one day and they have been friends ever since then. Viper looks at Mina with a somewhat sad look on his face, and she looks back and says;
?I understand, I'll wach Ekans for you.? Mina hands Viper the paper with the license plate number on it. ?Good luck,? she calls out as she walks away from the doors. Viper gives her a very strong look and nods.

He walks back into the station and the cop asks Viper;
?Did you forget his Pok?ball?? Viper shook his head.
?Nope, Ekans has been my friend for about 2 years now. I have never needed to catch her,? he explains.
?Wow, that?s true class. Now what seems to be the trouble?? the Cop asks.
?Well this morning I went to feed my Lapras her breakfast and she was not
there,? Viper says.
?Are you sure she was not just hiding somewere or just ran off?? the Cop asks.
?No way!? Viper yells, ?she would never do that!?
Viper continues, ?And my friend saw a pickup truck with a Lapras that looks very similar to mine.? the Cop has a somewhat unimpressed look on his face as
he talks
?Now that could have been anyones Lapras, kid. How do you know it was yours??
?She has a purple birth mark in the shape of a heart on her neck,? says Viper
?Well now that is a good way to tell if it is yours.? Viper slaps down a pice of paper with the truck's number on it.
?Here is the license plate number of the truck. If you can give me a call if you see or
hear anything about a Lapras.? Viper writes his cell phone number on the paper as well and then walks out of the station.

Viper slowly walks out of the station with his hands in his pockets and a sad look on his face. Mina looks at Viper and asks
?So what happened?? Mina asked.
?Well, they said they are going to do all they can?but I just don?t know. I just feel so bad that someone would want to take Lapras. And the day started out so well, too.? Viper sits down next to Mina and has a sad grin on his face. And then out of no where he is then pounced to the ground by Ekans and hugged. ?Ohh, Ekans, you crazy snake, you can always turn my day around.? Viper says with a happy look. ?But I'm not going to give up?Not now!? Viper commands. He stands in a very determined pose, and then a small shaking in his stomach erupts. ?But, umm?first?I need some food? Viper cracks a small grin, Mina falls over anime style and Ekans just sits there and giggles.

So they stop off at the local Pok?mon Center to grab some food. Viper rushed off so quick this morning that he did not get anything to eat. So he gets to stop and refuel his body with some brunch. He sits down across from Mina and
Ekans and he eats at a window seat. As he takes a few bites from his food Mina leaps from her seat and yells ?Viper! That's the truck!? as Mina points to the red pickup truck Viper drops his food and they all rush out to the truck.

The story keeps going! Will they find the owner of the truck? Do they know where the Lapras is? We shall see in the next chapter.


^_^

 

[emeraldslay]

You are very evil! Leaving the chapter at a cliffhanger! ^_^
Please continue, it is getting very good! I like the way you are developing the story slowly, and the picture is slowly getting bigger and bigger.

 

[espeon and umbreon]

Good chapter! Good description. Short, but good! Keep it up!

 

[EKANSSSSSSSSSS]

well...after talking with my sister IRL who is a much better writer then me...she has helped me out with my skills alittle bit...and so she wanted me to rewrite the other chapters with a bit more detale befor i work on chapter 3 so here is the rewrite.i love the way it turned out...and it made it seem a bit longer too


As the daybreak peeks over the mountain valley, we find ourselves in the world of Pokemon. A fantasy realm where animals are replaced by mythical beasts known as Pokemon. Our hero is a man named Viper Mitchell, who lives his life as a Pokemon Breeder. A Breeder is one who takes care of pokemon, wether it be grooming, training it doesn?t matter to a Breeder for its all in the love of Pokemon. And Viper who stands a strong six feet tall with deep jade colored eyes, His hair a dark obsidian with a bright violet streak in the middle giving his face a over all fierce look has been a breeder for about five years now. Living his life on a twenty acre farm built for housing Pokemon. He has about twenty of his own Pokemon as well as other peoples Pokemon.

Therefore, we start at about eight A.M. time for everyone?s breakfast. As the alarm sounds, he slams the snooze button with only the using one hand popping out from his blankets hoping it will go away as he does so every morning. And with a familiar ear pricing sound fills the room as Viper peeks his head from under his bedding and snarls at the alarm clock and hits the snooze button and tries to get back to his peaceful slumber. Two or three minuets pass when out of nowhere his door is slammed open almost breaking it off its hinges. Something leaps onto Viper?s mattress, as he wrestles around in his sheets a bit he stop and glances around to see this huge 20 foot long purple snake in his bed.

?Ekans!? he gasps ?you silly snake, you never let me sleep in do you?. Ekans has a silly little grin on her face wile she shakes her head left to right in a no motion. Viper sits there rubbing the sleep out of his eyes for his friend Ekans does not have a snooze. Ekans wraps herself one time around Viper?s body and nuzzles her face to Viper?s and they hug.

?I love you too girl? Viper said wile petting Ekans on her head. Ekans has been Viper?s friend for as long as they have had the farm. They have worked together on almost everything he has done, as a shadow Ekans has always been there when ever Viper has gone.

Viper staggers off to his closet to put on his morning work clothes, fixes his hair up in a spiky look. Takes a Razor to his bearded face, brushes his teeth and goes off to fix some breakfast. Walking off to the kitchen more awake and ready for the morning?s work he opens up the pantry which it stocked end to end with Pokemon food. Scratching his chin deciding what to feed everyone this morning. ?we will go with this one? he thinks to himself. He reaches to grab a 10 pound bag of food and lugs it over his shoulder giving out a small grunt he walks to the outside door and he feels a small poking at his back. He turns his head to see it was Ekans sitting there with her bowl in front of her gives Viper the puppy dog eyes.

?Na I didn?t forget about you sweetie? Viper explains and he takes Ekans?s bowl and fills it up, then sets it down next to Ekans.

?Ok I am off to feed the rest of are friends. Ill be back in a little wile? Viper tells Ekans as he walks out the door.

Every morning he has a routine, He starts at the end of the farm and works his way back to the house. So he takes a brisk jog down to the farthest end of the farm were the lake is. He catches his breath and he sets the food down and walks towards the lake looking around for something.

?Lapras!?!? he calls out ?come on girl its breakfast!? He ponders to himself as he takes a closer look around and in the lake. ?She is normally awake for breakfast? he thinks wile scratching his head. ?hummm, she could just be underwater? he sets down some food and calls out her name one more time to see if she would respond. But he could not see her so he shrugs his shoulders and takes the rest of the food and works his way back to his house at the other end of the farm

His next stop is at a vary open vary grassy area. He sets the food down about a foot from him looking all around, he cups his hands next to his face and then gives out a loud howl like a wolf. And just as he finishes he jumps to a ready stance waiting for something to happen. He gives out another long howl, and before he can finish he is pounced to the ground by this massive dog With bright tangerine fur with black tiger like patterns. This dog is known as Arcanine with one of its paws on Viper?s chest looking vary proud of its self.

?Wow Niney? Viper yells out ? Your Extreme Speed attack is getting faster and faster every day! I didn?t even see you this time? Viper pets and scratches his Arcanine that he has named Niney all over and makes him happy. Viper sets down some food for his Arcanine when he hears his cell phone ring.

Reaching into his pockets for his cell, he answers the phone ?Viper?s Pokehouse how can I help your Pokemon today?? and then his face lights up like the sun as he finds out its one of his best friends Mina on the other end of the line. But his face quickly turns to a puzzled look as mina asks Viper if he has seen his Lapras today. He quickly responds to tell her that he hasn?t. Mina continues to explain that she saw a pickup truck with a Lapras in the back, Viper almost dropped his phone he was so upset.

? I have to give the rest of the Pokemon there breakfast but I will be over as soon as I can Mina? Viper commands as he hangs up his cell phone. He grabs the rest of the food as he hopes on the back of Arcanine?s back.

?come on Niney! We have to feed everyone quickly.? Viper calls out
?ARC ARC!? Niney yells out in a dog like faction as they rush off to feed the rest of the Pokemon