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Time Machine

Zabuza

S.W.AT. sniper
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    this is the first time I had try to write a story. SO hope you all like it.


    Chapter one

    Long time ago, on a town called Hyrion there was a lot of ruins all around it, but there was one that was especially unique. It was the biggest of all the ruins. The people were proibed to get near to the ruins, because when people got near it they hearted a voice of a man talking inside it. This voice said ?Sir, can you possible help get out of hear?? But there was a law to punish the people that went near it, so no one wanted to go near it and no one told the knight about the voices. One day someone told a knight after hearing the voice of the young man coming from the inside of the ruins.

    The people got excited because 10 knights were finally going to open the enormous gaits of the ruins. Some people said that inside there was an undead hero. But they were all wrong, when the knights finally open it the only thing they all saw was a young man with strange cloths. ?Finally I am free of that place? he said ?someone should clean inside that place at least one time in a month.? He was finally going to take off when suddenly a knight got near the man and said ?who are you and why were you inside that ruins?? Then the man started at the knight and said ?my name is Silvaneshi and I don?t really know how did I got there.? The knight was very angry because they had to open a gigantic door just for a strange guy. ?Well you aren?t free you know? the knight said ?Silvaneshi, you are under arrest for getting inside a sacred place like this ruins.? Silvaneshi was sad to hear that, but he didn?t resist from getting arrested, so he give him self to the soldiers.

    3 hours passed and all the people were gone, so the knights decided to go to the castle and put in jail the man who had caused so much trouble. On their way to the castle they passed by an inn, Silvaneshi started at it and saw an old man sitting alone on a chair. The old man had with cloths, blue eyes and a strange hat. After some time they were finally at the castle. Some knights went to the entrance to check if there was going to be someone that was going to save the guy, while other of the knights waited at the entrance of the castle. After securing the area the main knight went to the other entrance to get him self inside if the castle. ?Bring Silvaneshi hear? one knight said ?It is time to punish him.? One of the knights went to for the man, but when he got to were they had let him with 5 of the knight, all of the knights were on the floor fainted. He noticed that Silvaneshi had escaped. The knight went back with the other group and told the main knight that the prisoner had escaped, he didn?t live a clue that the knight could take and check to were had Silvaneshi gone.
     
    Chapter 2: The old man

    Silvaneshi was running towards the inn were the old man was sited. On his way to the inn there were a lot of knights all around the city, so he couldn?t go that easy. He then saw that one of the soldiers was alone and was very sleepy. He started to think about how to get there. After some time he thought a great plan. He jumped to the top of one building and he made his way to the knight, he jumped down of the house and kicked the knight on the neck making him fall to the floor. Silvaneshi took the knight to the top of the building were he took the armor of the knight and put it on him. He finally got down again and started to walk trying to make no suspicious moves so that no one could see the difference. After an hour of walking he was finally there, at the inn?s entrance. He got inside and saw the old man. ?Long time no seen, Gornafor? Silvaneshi said to the old man. Then he took a chair and sat down on the table were Gornafor was sited. Then he took of the helm and put it on the table so that Gornafor could see Silvaneshi?s face. ?Is that you Silvaneshi?? Gornafor asked ?why are you here?? Silvaneshi looked at Gornafor for sometime and then he said ?Yes it is me. And I came because I missed your funeral last time.? Gornafor was very surprised for what Silvaneshi had just said ?my funeral you say? Then you did used, didn?t you??
    ?Yes I used the time machine.?
    ?But how? I?m the only one that knows how to use it.?
    ?That?s right but when I finally got to he funeral, it was over I saw your body and then suddenly the thing started to work. Strange isn?t it??

    Gornafor was happy that someone could finally use it that wasn?t him. ?So were is it?? he asked with a smile in his face. ?I don?t know? Silvaneshi replied ?I think I lost it when I teleported.? Suddenly, from no were, the main knight appeared and saw Silvaneshi talking with Gornafor (one of the good friends of the knight.) The main knight walked until he got to the table, he was behind Silvaneshi so he couldn?t see him. ?Galdar, why are you here?? Gornafor asked. ?Who is Galdar?? Silvaneshi asked. Galdar (the main knight) got mad and said ?it is me Silvaneshi! Remember! You are under arrest for getting to the sacred ruins and for escaping from knights of Hyrion.?

    Silvaneshi got nervous. He looked at the back and saw the knight. ?I can?t go to jail? Silvaneshi said ?I will speak at the funeral of Gornafor tomorrow.? Galdar was surprised to hear that how was he going to talk at Gornafor?s funeral if he was still alive? ?He is still alive you know. He is in front of you.? Galdar said. ?Yes I know that? Silvaneshi said ?but he doesn?t have much time left.?

    To be continue ?..
     
    your story is soooo sttttuuuupppiiidd.I mean how can you read all of this in like 2 seconds it takes like 3,000,000,000,000 hours it is ssoooo stupid.
     
    Well I don't know what kind of books do you read, but this is a minimum of one page in word. Normally, on other web pages, the minimum is of 5 pages. And another thing, if you thing that your comment ofended me youare wrong.
     
    Chapter 3: The punishment

    ?I don?t trust you? Galdar said with a mad voice to Silvaneshi 2you are still under arrest.? Gornafor started at Galdar for a moment and said ?don?t arrest him my friend. He maybe of some use for me or for you.? Galdar stared at Gornafor for a moment and then he replied ?I don?t care I broke the laws so he is going to jail.? Then Galdar made Silvaneshi stand up and they took of, but before getting out of the inn Silvaneshi yelled ?remember to be careful at night, you know why.?

    Some time passed and they were at the castle once more, but this time Galdar was going to make sure that Silvaneshi didn?t escape. So he brought Silvaneshi with him. Galdar opened the enormous door and walked in. ?Is there a jail at the castle?? Silvaneshi asked. ?No, there is not. Here you will know how much time you are going to spend in jail? Galdar replied. Galdar took Silvaneshi to a room where a lot of people were sitting down on a lot of chairs. Silvaneshi was told to sit down on another chair. Galdar went to one of the sits that were near him and sat down there. Then the judgment began. Three hours later the judge had made his decision. ?Silvaneshi you are going to spend 5 years at prison for inuring knights and for entering to a sacred place. That?s all I will say.? The judge said. Two knights went inside the room and took Silvaneshi to another room were he was going to spend that night. ?He is going to be transferred to prison tomorrow right?? one knight asked to Galdar. ?Yes he is? Galdar replied ?so make sure he doesn?t escapes.?

    Silvaneshi thought on a lot of thing of a lot of things inside that room. Things like why each time he said the true no one believed him, another of his thoughts was that if he was going to jail, was that going to change the future. Will Gornafor die on the same day and/or time, the same way? He couldn?t rest he was very nervous until he finally fall sleep.

    Back on the inn it was getting dark but it wasn?t night already. Galdar appeared and looked for Gornafor. He was sitting on the same chair as always, eating eggs so that after eating he could go to sleep. Galdar pulled over a chair and sat down on the same table. ?So, is he going to jail?? Gornafor asked. ?Yes he is, but still? Galdar said with a strange voice ?why did you mean when you said that he may be of some use to me?? ?I will explain it as short as possible, okay? Gornafor said.
    ?Okay?
    ?Alright so this is the story?..?


    To be continue ?..
     
    I'm soory for what I said I like it now it is soooo cool.(and don't double post).
     
    For your information I'M NOT A BOY!If you are talking to me I'm sorry look at the age I'm only 9.
     
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