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Transition

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    Just a poem I wrote a while ago... it's me trying to fight depression... well... sorta...

    Transition

    I hear the song echoing in my mind
    While I lay here in a state of depression
    The rhythm, the melody and the words
    All seem to find the right expression

    The song was boring into my mind
    It?s about the useless things in regret
    On things that you wished you didn?t do
    It?s also about someone you want to forget

    Time moves on, the song goes
    You can?t stay down there doing nothing
    Because if you couldn?t rise from your woes
    It doesn?t make you part of the living

    And then it dawned in me
    That the universe is vast
    There are still many things to do
    Aside from looking at the past

    Agitation, fear, and paranoia
    All disappeared from me at that moment
    And immediately I felt new feelings
    Happiness, freedom, and anger were evident

    Suddenly I felt free like the wind
    It was as if I?m free from my own chains
    Sadness was gone and I was happy
    And inside, I couldn?t feel the pains

    As the song ends, I felt new
    The last strumming of the guitar
    Was just so beautiful to hear
    Even though I have this unbearable scar

    My broken heart was mended
    Every piece fitted in place
    I stood up and stretched my arms
    Even with a wide smile on my face

    1/24/05
     
    onigiri, your sense of rythim(sp) sucks XD but the rhyming's good tho XD
     
    Everyone improves, Digi... XD
    But I have no sense of rythm though. And that means I'm a musically challenged guitar player... =P
     
    *pats Niko* Ehh, I don't care about no silly date. XD

    Awwwwwws, this poem so describes me at times. XD Music sometimes has a way of clinging to a person's feelings. By that I mean, you may be in a depressed state, and a depressing song comes on. For me, I think "Oh great." XD But sometimes that depressing song is all I need to realize there's more to life than this.

    I always have someone to dig me out of those holes, and there's always some way to lift your spirits and go on living life with a smile on your face. To just walk the streets and have not a care in the world. n___n

    Okies...if that sounded nothing like what your poem was about - give me a break, I haven't done this in a while. XD *glomps Niko* Shweet poem, though. ^.~

    ~Kelsey
     
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