Trap in Time

[flame_chi]

Trap in Time

You hang there,
Lost in space or time,
Dreaming of things to do.
You wish that you were free,
To do whatever you want,
But you cant your trapped.
You feel sad, an alone.
You wish you had someone to love.
But you cant!
In time you wait,
You wait for nothing,
Because in time, nothing will happen.

by me

 

[Stripes]

Sometimes you can feel that way can't you?

 

[Kyosuke]

I think sometime or another everyone feels that way, its a nice poem that almost everyone can relate to.

 

[butterfly]

ya i agree liquid thunder! i love the peom that u wrote about
flames

 

[Geometric-sama]

Just how I feel at the moment, bleak, uncaring, empty...

... I feel a poem coming on ...

 

[Elite Four Lance]

Yeah, really nice poem. Keep it up! Your really good.