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Vashiel's Neglect (PG-16)

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Shiney

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    Vashiel's Neglect (A huge credit to our favorite RP'ing fiend- Err, friend, Axel on this RP.)

    There are many things in this world that we can not explain. Well, the events that you will soon hear aren't those kinds of 'things', but they're weird and disturbing nonetheless!

    Angels, those beings of the light that conquer the dark in our hearts, and represent the greater good in our souls. That is your stereotypical angel. However, as you come to understand over time, stereotypes are just stereotypes, and they don't properly represent their subjects. A good example of this would be the angel who goes by the name of Vashiel.

    Vashiel was banished from Heaven after performing a variety of things that would classify him as a terrible angel. For example, he had not done a good deed in over 200 years, having a very sloppy record/background, along with a habit of substance abuse. The last was the straw that broke the proverbial camel's back, causing him to be unleashed upon the poor people of Earth. This is how his banishment went...

    One night, in the middle of April, Vashiel was being his lazy self in an average sized town, when his superiors came in to check on him. As they did so, he happened to be enjoying one of the lords more blessed creations, Cannabis. Of course, with the suprise inspection In the process, he hid the plant, and began to hastily catch up on lost work. In the process, he altered the lives of many humans, whom of which did not desire any changes at all.

    He was of course banished for smoking in the kingdom of heaven, until he can do enough good to restore his status, and he figures, what better place to start than to help the people he changed?

    You are one of these humans, and your lives have been altered in one way or another by Vashiel. You will soon encounter the fallen angel, in hopes if restoring your old life...

    Form

    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Appearance:
    Personality:
    History:
    What changes took place?:
    Special Skills: (What is your character good at?)
    Other:
     
    Name: Kyraa Kiyomo
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female

    Appearance: She has strawberry blonde hair and sapphirre blue eyes; she wears only pink and is allowed to wear only pink. It was like a curse that would kill her if she didn't. Her strawberry blonde hair was always in pigtails. She wears a pink pleaded cheerleader skirt, a pink girly tank top and pink sandals. She loved putting her hair up in little braids but it was always in pigtails for the most part. She was never seen in any other color except for pink. Whether her outfits were different or not the color was always the same.
    Personality: Although Kyraa used to pick fights with the boys and win, she now hates fights and loves anything that is cute. She is a very sweet and charming young girl and is nothing but super cute and super adorable. Kyraa loves to giggle at different things that amuse her and smile alot. She is never sad or lonely and she loves to make new friends.

    History: Kyraa was once a tomboy, a lifestyle that started when she was 6 years old. She had always hung out with boys and picked up fighting and karate skills. Although she is no longer able to pick fights. The changed happened when she was asleep a month ago and she has been hoping it was only a dream that she can't wake up from.

    What changes took place?: Kyraa became a girly girl and has the powers of being cute and polite like a normal young girl would. Everyone seems to like the new Kyraa but she is against and she wishes she could go back to what she was. She wished it was just some dream that maybe she could wake up from anytime but it seemed to be true.

    Special skills: She knows how to use Gravity and can cast fire. She has some karate skills that help her out alot but she doesnt like to use those skills to hurt anyone. Other skills also include invisibility and the power to read minds.
     
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    An angel that got busted for substance abuse? That's priceless!



    Name: Silver Harper (I don't feel creative)

    Age: 14

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Please allow me to post this later. I'm kind of tired right now, and wouldn't want to mess up on it.

    Personality: Silver is overconfident six ways from Sunday. He loves to brag and challenge people to anything, and his trademark action is a cocky grin when the other person accepts. However, he is not always like this. He is usually a typical class clown in school: lazy, sarcastic, and a few bad grades. His one weakness is his love for dogs and pizza.

    History: Silver comes from a very wealthy family. Growing up, he was offered everything he could ever want, but he refused it because he wanted to be "normal", like his friends. As he grew, he began to do bad in school just to make his parents mad. They were furious and cut him out of the will. Although his grades go low every year, he still manages to get a passing grade.

    What changes took place?: After the mistakes were made, Silver was gifted with unhuman senses of smell and hearing. He can smell and hear anything a dog can, no matter what it is. Also, his teeth are sharper and he can run on all fours really fast.

    Special Skills: Silver can spin while running on all fours to create a tornado. When it clears, however, he is very dizzy and needs a few seconds to get used to everything.

    Other: Silver has a pet bunny named Bun-Bun that dislikes him. Alot.
     
    Will edit later. Please bear with me~

    Name: Marika Lynn Charendoff
    Age: 19
    Gender: Female
    Appearance:
    Personality:
    History:
    What changes took place?: Marika gained various psionic abilities, including but not limited to telekinesis, telepathy, clairvoyance, and pyrokinesis. Despite the broad scope of these abilities, she has very little control over them. Due to this lack of control, daily life's gotten to be a bit...screwy for her. Randomly lighting stuff ablaze, seeing stuff she shouldn't, intruding into other people's minds, and generally inconveniencing the lives of others... She's been fired from several jobs, she nearly burned down her college dorm, and quite a few people want her dead for finding out stuff she shouldn't have.
    Special skills: In addition to her psychic powers, Marika is a dead shot with all known firearms; she is also a skilled knife fighter and a formidable unarmed combatant proficient in at least half a dozen styles of unarmed combant.
    Other: Marika carries a pair of Mark 23 Mod 0s, a G36, and an MSG-90 with her at all times.
     
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    Shiney said:
    OOC: All of your sign-ups look good, except to me it seems more like you're giving yourselves super powers than screwing up your lives.
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    OOC: Ok then~ They're you go Shiney chan. *edited it* I'll edit more tomorrow so it makes more sense, I should be in bed....=<
     
    This sounds interesting...

    Name: Arianna Paulson

    Age: 13

    Gender: Female

    Appearance: Waist-length golden hair, amber eyes, cat ears, tail, slim figure, 5 feet, 4 inches tall

    Personality: Playful, mischievious, flirtatious, tends to act a bit like a cat.

    History: Ari was a quiet and reserved girl until her mother and father got divorced when she was 11 years old. Afterward, Arianna no longer cared what people thought of her. She didn't care about her grades in school, and she became a completely different person. This was about the time the mistakes were made.

    What changes took place?: In addition to dramatic personality changes, Ari's physical appearance changed. She was infused with the qualities of a cat, resulting in her now having a brown tail and brown cat ears. Everyone distanced themselves from her, even her closest friends. She then isolated herself from all people, and is still living alone.

    Special Skills: Is often nearly silent, can see in the dark; makes for a good spy

    Other: She dislikes most people because they ran her out of her home and tried to get her to submit to genetic experiments, but she's good with animals.
     
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    That sign-up reminds me of someone on another site. A cat with the power to control water...


    And Shiney, don'tcha think my character's life is screwed up enough already?
     
    Garouga! Bare Your Fangs! said:
    That sign-up reminds me of someone on another site. A cat with the power to control water...


    And Shiney, don'tcha think my character's life is screwed up enough already?
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    OOC: Yes, I do, however that doesn't really give vashiel a reason to help, since if he did, it would be to "correct" that mistake. Maybe we can think of something, but please PM me so that we don't clog up this thread any more.

    Also, I'm waiting on just one or two more signups, but so far, everyone's in. Whether or not you stay though, will depend on your RP'ing skills, since I haven't actually RP'ed closely with some of you before.
     
    Name: Dianna Niki Bryce, Nicknamed "Di"
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Since I'm in the middle of moving, I don't really have time to write this out, so... she looks like this: Summer Outfit 1, Summer Outift 2, Summer Outfit 3
    Personality:
    Male
    In his male life, David was very intelligent, and very blunt as well. He wasn't extremely socially active, but he still had a group of friends he hung around with. He liked to be the smartest around, so his friends were generally complete idiots all around. He was also very shy around girls, and had problems communicating his feelings with them. He is very persistant, and doesn't like to give up.
    Female
    As David is changed into Dianna, his life is completely altered to that of a girls life, though he keeps his boys personality. However, everthing prior to the change was played out by a female personality, so everyone expects her to have the same personality. Dianna is very outgoing and competitive, and often dense. She is smart as well, but hangs out with all sorts of people, and is somewhat popular in her grade. she is also very persistant, and has a very childish nature.
    History:
    Male
    David's parents had always had high hopes for his education, so they are always forcing him to study. Because of this, they tend to pay more attention to his sister than him, giving her specia privledges that he wouldn't get in a million years, Because of this, he had come to hate both his parents and his sister, and he ran away from home often. Whenever he wasn't contained at home, he would be out at a soccer field kicking the ball around until he was found by his parents and taken away. He had no real skill in soccer though.
    Female
    Unlike his male self, his female self is adored by her parents just as much as her sister. Because she is a very active participant in sports, her parents don't press too hard on studies, but they do have higher hopes education wise for her. She gets along well with both her parents and her sister. She is socially active, and is very skilled in soccer, but plays most sports in general.
    What changes took place?: Dianna was originally a 15 year old boy before the changes occured. Everyone believes he has always been a girl, and any form of documentation has been changed accordingly, as well as relations with others. (Shiney made me do it! ;.;
    Special Skills: Dianna is good at many sports, but soccer in particular. She is also very good at video games.
     
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    OOC: You know you're glad I did, david. Late sign ups are as always, accepted.

    IC: A young man yawned as he climbed into the upstairs window, apparently oblivious to the criminal nature of his acts, his hair a pale grey, almost white. He stepped in carefully, and scratched his scalp as he walked over to the bed. He was dressed ina short vest over a typical Tshirt, with faded heans and sneakers. Of course, he also had a pair of small, white wings poking out from his vest. He began poking the figre in the bed, far from gently as he got out a clipboard. "M... Miss Bryce, up plese." he said, yawning again.
     
    Kyraa waited as patiently as she could for her name to be called too; she was sitting very politely just like a real lady would. Her pigtails waved around as she looked all around the room and seeing alot of people. Hearing the name of who was called she then remembered that the name was familiar but she wasn't really sure.

    I can't think of why that name sounds so familiar! She thought to herself.

    Kyraa just couldn't seem to remember anyone that she would know; she only knew one person that she knew she could never forget and that was her best friend Robin. I wonder if Robin knows what happened. She thought, starting to miss her best friend. I wish I could go see her! She thought once more as a few tears started rolling down her ligh pink cheeks.

    (OOC: Shiney and David, please tell me if I should lengthing that or if I should make any other changes by pming me. I'll be sure to fix it later. =3)
     
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    Clouds. Fluffy, white clouds. To Silver, they almost looked painted in the light blue sky. Each had the perfect amount of white. The perfect amount of gray. Each one floated on without a care in the world.

    I wish I could be a cloud...Just carelessly float on from day to day. They're so...free. Silver's thoughts of clouds and freedom ended as something came crashing down on the end of his desk. Awoken from this trance, he saw that it was a ruler. The person holding it was none other than his math teacher.

    "Mister Harper, are you paying attention? Or should I send this class to eternal darkness for the rest of the year?" To Silver, this line was like something a supervillain would say. His math teacher, who he saw as a demon, seemed like the perfect person to say that.

    "Uhm...No." Silver saw his teacher's eye twitch and knew he had forgotten something. He knew what was coming up, and how to counter it.

    "No, ma'am!"

    "Please don't call me ma'am. I'm a guy." The classroom erupted with laughter. Silver looked around and everyone laughing and couldn't stop himself from grinning. His math teacher was at her boiling point. Her face was the shade of red one would use to describe anger, which was exactly what she was feeling.

    "You...Office...NOW!!!" Silver got up from his desk and stretched. The class stared at him as he winked and headed for the door. Everyone knew this drill all too well. Administration was probably waiting for him in the office already, with his mother's phone number in hand.
     
    Cool.
    I would like to join, if you'll accept me that is.

    Name: Taxiarchai. Just Taxiarchai. (it does actually mean something.its greek.but i wont tell you.)

    Age: 17

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: [img=https://img454.imageshack.us/img454/768/hyegunsincross9ua.th.jpg] Yes, those are his actual clothes. He prefers to stand out rather than blend in.

    Personality: His favorite saying is 'archangel.' Signifigant purpose, this serves. Might give you a clue to another part of my sign-up. Anyway, he's loud, though relatively good at school work, hates dogs and all other animals except fish, and, when not in school, spends most of his time at, or in front of, the movie theater. The movie theater, of course, has a games corner with five computers, air hockey, pool, and more arcade games.

    History: His family was never rich, and they lived in a rented out house. Every month when the rent would come, Taxiarchai spent a lot more time anywhere he could make money. He tried to sneak as much of his winnings possible into the family funds. His parents were hardly home, desperately trying to make enough money to pay for his college funds. Even though the family wasn't home often, they were happy. But after the fire, Taxiarchai became secluded, even though he tried to cover it up.

    What changes took place?: Well, Taxiarchai recieved a tattoo across his back. A sprig of mistletoe. Through several hours spent researching at a public library, he discovered this was a token to one of the Norse gods: Baldur. His grades also dropped terribly, and when he arrived home from school on the day of the changes, he found his house burned down and his parents killed. So he is now boarding with a friend. Other changes are that he is now tone deaf, his eyes turned emerald green, and he now has a craving to be silent.

    Special Skills: Before, Taxiarchai was loud and rambunctious, but now he has the urge to be quiet. He's actually quite good at pool. Since the incident, he's had rather good accuracy. His hearing has taken a turn for the worst. It's just tone deaf now, but he doesn't know how much worse his hearing wil get.

    Other: Only about three friends.

    I think I'll wait to see if I'm accepted, and brood on the possiblilty of playing first or third person...?
     
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    "Mm... 5 more minutes mom..." I mumbled, half asleep, as I swatted at the assumed finger poking me in the back. I rolled over a bit to the right, planning to rest against the wall, as my bed was normally positioned against it. However, I fell straight out of the bed and onto the floor, leaving me slightly dazed.

    "Ehhh..." I said, entirely confused, as I glanced around. "This isn't my room..." Well, technically, it WAS my room, but it was decorated strangely. The walls were pink, and decorated with pictures of boy bands and movie stars. My bed was positioned head underneath the window in the center of the bedroom, which explained why I fell off. Taking a good look, I realized my bed was a white chest bed, a set of drawers on each side. My sheets were... pink, and there was a white duvet. There was also a nightside table on both sides of the bed, and taking a glance at the one nearest to me, I could see many girls magazines lining it.

    That's when my eyes came across something bizarre... A guy with wings? "Hey! Who are you!" I questionned as I got up off the ground, but soon tripped over the sheets and landed on my front on the floor, sending a surge of pain through my body. However, the surge was incredibly painful around my chest area. I sat back up, and glanced down. "Ah! The heck!?" I cried as I found a pair of female breasts covered in long pink PJs. I quickly ran my hand down to my crotch area. Nope, nothing! I had thought my voice sounded wierd, but I has assumed I had a cold or something. I couldn't do anything other than sit there, staring, my right eye twitching.
     
    The young man waved jauntily with a pen, asthough this was nothing out of the normal, before turning his gaze to the clipboard. "good morning miss Bryce, I'm here on- Err, customer satisfaction. Yeah, that's it... I understand there's been an, err, problem, with changes in your recent life?" He asked, though his tone of voice made it all too clear that he was worried, or more aptly; he was obviously scared of the girl before him, and there was more than a trace of alchohol on his breath.
     
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    "Changes?" I repeated as I got up and stormed clumsily over to whatever this cosplayer was. "You want to know any CHANGES in my life? Well, here are a few!" I was ticked off now, and I don't even understand why. I guess it was my way of distracting myself of thinking of inappropriate thoughts. "Lets see here! I woke up to find my room was completely feminized, my voice sounds like that of an overused female voice actor in an anime, I have two breasts, and MY MANHOOD IS GONE!"

    I began pacing as my body began adjusting to the weight. If I was myself looking at what I looked like now, I'd probably call it "hot". However, its different when you're in their shoes. After I calmed down a bit, I glared over at the cosplayer. "Did YOU have something to do with this?" I asked coldly as I pulled the brown hair out of my face.
     
    Vashiel shrugged, before the clipboard and pen dissapeared, the wings suddenly growing behind his back as he held out his hand. "Name's Vashiel, I'm afraid there was a bit of a screw-up upstairs, and this is what happened, I'll be happy to explain." He said, not noticing the young girl in the doorway. "So, let me introduce myself. I am Vashiel, son of Michael, Angel of the third circle, 413 years old, and unmarried. I am, or was recently employed in the astral wing of the fourth branch of the celestial filing depository, 369 Eden Lane, Heaven, 01741."
     
    "Miu?"
    A small gray kitten mewed at Arianna as she stroked its fur. It batted at her long golden hair and climbed onto her shoulder. Arianna sighed. She wished she could see Silver again. He had been the only one who was nice to her, even before she turned into half a cat. When she was in school she had always watched him goofing off in class, wishing she could be outgoing as he was.She wondered what he was like now, if his math teacher still disliked him, if he got better grades than he used to. Oh well. She would probably never see him again anyway.
     
    (OOC: Shiney, am I supposed to be that young girl? o_o)

    Kyraa peaked into the "boy's" doorway and almost didnt recognize who he was at first; she was hoping she could find Robin but something had caught her eye.

    Vashiel? She thought. After hearing what he had told Dianna and thought maybe it was why she looked like a girly girl in only pink. Kyraa was too shy to say anything, all she wanted to do was to find her best friend and maybe she could stay more calmer.

    Kyraa started walking down the hall way to Robin's room.
     
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