Wedding crasher

Cybex Mewtwo

Someone's angry. :/
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    The new character I made, Enigma, has some sort of unlogical reason amongst him. He wishes to kidnap my yuuka. Why? No clue. On the wedding day, he crashes the party.

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    Hmm.....a new enemy....maybe.....what do you all think?

    (based on opinions, he'll be the next enemy...)
     
    Thank you Hunk. This makes me feel better.
     
    This could be interesting. Cybex has yet another rival.

    Maybe I should get a rival. Well, I do have one, but only in my fanfics, which are currently missing. X_x;

    I like how yuuka's dress blends in perfectly with her skin. Cy, though, doesn't look good in a tux. It just doesn't seem like something he'd wear. Amazing detail the clothing, though. I don't know many people who would even consider putting that many buttons on the tux.

    Awesome pic, as always. I'd expect nothing less from you.
     
    awesome!
    :3 it seems like a great idea for a new rival!
    @@ he's all cool-looking and mysterious!

    :3 as for the art, great job with this!
    @@ the only thing i can siggest is maybe adding a few clouds in the background :3
    i really like your composition in this!!
    :3 awesome job!!
    ~kura
     
    GAWD Kura! There's always ONE thing in the picture that you think shouyld be added, changed or swapped! But, these are constructive and thought provoking and show useful tips. So, I may intertwine clouds. But will there ever be one picture that I do where you have no actual suggestions? Who knows. But now I be determined to impress Kura!
     
    Cybex Mewtwo said:
    GAWD Kura! There's always ONE thing in the picture that you think shouyld be added, changed or swapped! But, these are constructive and thought provoking and show useful tips. So, I may intertwine clouds. But will there ever be one picture that I do where you have no actual suggestions? Who knows. But now I be determined to impress Kura!
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    ;_; ack! sorry sorry!!
    @@.. i always try my best to push artists to the limits
    :3 i want everyone to improve @@..
    but you gotta think of these things when making your art..
    look at your pictures hard and see what needs to be improved in them
    (i myself have a real trouble with backgrounds.. @@ so.. i go crazy and i spend a day just thinking of backgrounds to put behind my drawings..)

    ._. i just hope im not making you feel bad @@..
    your art is perfectly fine :3 the composition is amazing in them, and your proportioning is really good!!
    @@ i only find that when i comes to colouring, you seem to just flood-fill with one colour and you dont add much detail into it.
    ._. if you look at your picture, the left side wouldnt need clouds since there's already alot going on in the picture..
    but the right side, it looks sort of plain, and the amount of area which is the plainest is the sky..
    therefore: clouds

    @@ sorry if im making you feel bad or anything..
    and if i am, i'll stop @@..
    i look at more of the art than the story..
    and i try my best to critique every picture to the fullest..
    :3 and i bet i'll see a flawless picture soon!
    you're becoming more amazing with every picture you draw
    keep it up!!
    ~kura
     
    ;_; ack! sorry sorry!!
    @@.. i always try my best to push artists to the limits
    :3 i want everyone to improve @@..
    but you gotta think of these things when making your art..
    look at your pictures hard and see what needs to be improved in them
    (i myself have a real trouble with backgrounds.. @@ so.. i go crazy and i spend a day just thinking of backgrounds to put behind my drawings..)

    ._. i just hope im not making you feel bad @@..
    your art is perfectly fine :3 the composition is amazing in them, and your proportioning is really good!!
    @@ i only find that when i comes to colouring, you seem to just flood-fill with one colour and you dont add much detail into it.
    ._. if you look at your picture, the left side wouldnt need clouds since there's already alot going on in the picture..
    but the right side, it looks sort of plain, and the amount of area which is the plainest is the sky..
    therefore: clouds

    @@ sorry if im making you feel bad or anything..
    and if i am, i'll stop @@..
    i look at more of the art than the story..
    and i try my best to critique every picture to the fullest..
    :3 and i bet i'll see a flawless picture soon!
    you're becoming more amazing with every picture you draw
    keep it up!!
    ~kura
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    You are perfctly fine. I'm just messing with ya is all. Now I hope I didn't make you feel bad! To be completely honest, I don't do detail. I just draw, and make it look better than black and white, then ship it here. I don't do detail at all, and if I do it is minor. Just keep this in mind....and here are 3 more...time for more story!


    ahem...Cy knew that this guy ment trouble. He had that gleam in his eye...it just screamed 'psychopath'. But he could handle him. (this part yame~TD would recognize). It was then that something in his brain triggered as he was talking, and he became stronger the longer they stood there. He became biggr, and the tux ripped clear off. But before the increase could continue, it was time for the throwdown.
    Wedding crashers 2

    As the battle raged on, cy was getting beat. Horribly. No matter what he could do, Enigma kept rising and fighting on par with him. It bacame a reality when help was needed. His two friends (Yame~TD and Abskull, you help me out!) decide to lend a hand in Enigmas defeat.
    wedding crashers 3

    Even though it was 3 on 1, he was still as powerful as ever and kept the three heros on their toes. So, 4 more came to help (Forest Grovyle, The Hunk, Yami's Girl and Chairman Kaga).
    wedding crasher 4
     
    oh my god i loved no wait theres no words to explain it.is there going to be more I would love to see it.
     
    Believe me, 8 isn't going to be enough!

    oh my god i loved no wait theres no words to explain it.is there going to be more I would love to see it.
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    There will be more, this is going to go on for a good while...and thatnk you for the comments! *hugs yuuka* As for the rest of ya...*throws awards to everyone else*
     
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    What time is the wedding on Thursday? I might not be here and I have to be here for my buds wedding!
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    Yep. Thursday at 3:00. Hope you can make it, if not I'll just save you some cake!
     
    Hey Cy, I finally managed to get onto this thread! XD
    I love the way you create these little episodes ^^ They're so inventive! All of your characters have such a personality - you can just imagine these sorts of things happening in something like a TV show! I wonder what'll happen next? :D
     
    So you curious eh.....NEXT TWO!

    With the addition of four more, it was seven on one. But Enigma showed no fear. In fact, he accepted it.With a smile, he whipped off the jacket to reveal muscles. He was no meager villian. He was a huge and strong villian!
    wedding crasher 5

    Everyone fought with all their might, but they were no match for him.....but Cy's fiance yuuka jumped in. Surprised by this, enigma invited her to try and take him on.
    wedding crasher 6
     
    He made her mad. This could get too ugly for the children. Better slap a higher rating on it. XD

    I can't wait to see how this ends. Sadly, I'll probably be either gone to the store or playing UT2K4 or UC2 when you post it. What? I've got to vent my anger somehow! XD
     
    He made her mad. This could get too ugly for the children. Better slap a higher rating on it. XD
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    Hide the kids! This could get ugly REAL FAST!
     
    WOW!! :3 awesome effects!! @@ i really like how you made the grass flow and the clouds flow (especially in wedding crasher 3)

    the fourth one needs a bit of fixing up because it looks like you just tried to fill in the space ._. but it's nothing big to worry about

    @@ i LOVE #2 and #3 though :3
    awesome work!
    amazing poses :3 and clothes and facial expressions!!

    #5 and #6 are really great too!!
    @@ number 5 looks plain but complete since the boxes around it give it alot of detail! :3
    #6 is really great too!!!! <3
    so awesome job with those!!

    @@ great job with all of these :3
    i LOVE them!! :3
    keep it up!!!
    ~kura
     
    Here comes the finale......

    No matter how hard they all fought, Enigma was way too powerful to be defeated. Within the hour, they had fallen. But, within three of them, something wonderous happened. A power awakened deep inside them. They rose a few inches off the ground; ready to fight and give it their all.

    Enigma was defeated by the three, and he vanished. Cy and yuuka continued with the ceremony...but one thing still plauged their minds...if such a powerful foe existed...was he really defeated?
     
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