Anxiety.
Walking on sunshine.
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What do you think of my story. I havn't finished it, It doesn't even have a name yet XD but I am making a story from my own Idea, so all the characters are my characters! Before I go any further with it, I wanna see what you guys think :)
Here it goes
Luca walked towards the door, he leaned over, stretching his arm towards the gold doorknob, his fingertips just touched it when, a strange smell took over his body, he knew the smell, he couldn't think of what it would be. Then there was a crash and a curse word…
"Ugh…" Grunted Luca, trying to sound awake, and failing, he lent over the alarm clock by his bed and he searched it for the glow button, he pressed it and looked at the time, it read 2:00am, he grunted again, but louder and lowered the alarm clock to the bedside table.
"2:00am…" He whispered
"Huh?" Whispered Zak
"It's 2:00… I should be sleeping, what are you doing anyway?" He asked. A light flickered on in the dorm making Zak's spiky bright green hair shine, even the part the was covering his eye, the visible eye shone a bright blue, Luca squinted his eyes and mumbled something that sounded like 'too bright'
"Zak was hungry!" Said Ron happily,
"And?"
"We made Noodles" Said Zak, showing the cheesiest grin he could afterwards,
"You woke me up…"
"Accidentally" Said Ron, Luca evil stared him,
"You 'accidentally' woke me up at 2:00am for noodles!?" Luca said in a loud whisper.
"Want some?" Grinned Zak as he held out the bowl.
"I'll pass, why are you dressed?" Asked Zak
"We woke up at 1:00, no reason to stay in P.J's all day!" laughed Zak, Luca didn't laugh, he rolled over and pulled the blanket over his head, Zak and Ron started to walk out,
"Lights off" Luca said into his pillow, Zak lent through the doorway, turned of the lights, and closed the door. But Luca could still hear them prancing down the hallway.
Not to long after, about 2:15 Luca got up and crawled across the floor, lacking the energy to stand, he lifted his hand to the wall and searched for the light switch, once he flickered it on, he walked to the mirror, His jet black hair was ruffled, but the long fringe covering one eye remained there. His visible eye was slate grey and squinting at the light that was way too bright. He walked over to the showers and had 5 minute shower, dried himself and got out and got changed.
"We need to wash up the dishes…" Said Ron, not loosing his cheery shine
"I know, lets get to it" Laughed Zak, it only took a few minutes, and they were watching T.V
"You haven't noticed yet Ron" laughed Zak
"Noticed what?"
"Your belched blond hair…" laughed Zak, Ron's Green eye's widened, he ran to the nearest mirror and looked at his white spiky hair, he laughed so hard he couldn't breath.
"You did this? Why didn't Luca say anything?" Laughed Ron
"Yes, I did, and also, the light offended his eyes, and your white hair didn't help, I don't think he could actually see!" Laughed Zak in a reply.
Here it goes
Luca walked towards the door, he leaned over, stretching his arm towards the gold doorknob, his fingertips just touched it when, a strange smell took over his body, he knew the smell, he couldn't think of what it would be. Then there was a crash and a curse word…
"Ugh…" Grunted Luca, trying to sound awake, and failing, he lent over the alarm clock by his bed and he searched it for the glow button, he pressed it and looked at the time, it read 2:00am, he grunted again, but louder and lowered the alarm clock to the bedside table.
"2:00am…" He whispered
"Huh?" Whispered Zak
"It's 2:00… I should be sleeping, what are you doing anyway?" He asked. A light flickered on in the dorm making Zak's spiky bright green hair shine, even the part the was covering his eye, the visible eye shone a bright blue, Luca squinted his eyes and mumbled something that sounded like 'too bright'
"Zak was hungry!" Said Ron happily,
"And?"
"We made Noodles" Said Zak, showing the cheesiest grin he could afterwards,
"You woke me up…"
"Accidentally" Said Ron, Luca evil stared him,
"You 'accidentally' woke me up at 2:00am for noodles!?" Luca said in a loud whisper.
"Want some?" Grinned Zak as he held out the bowl.
"I'll pass, why are you dressed?" Asked Zak
"We woke up at 1:00, no reason to stay in P.J's all day!" laughed Zak, Luca didn't laugh, he rolled over and pulled the blanket over his head, Zak and Ron started to walk out,
"Lights off" Luca said into his pillow, Zak lent through the doorway, turned of the lights, and closed the door. But Luca could still hear them prancing down the hallway.
Not to long after, about 2:15 Luca got up and crawled across the floor, lacking the energy to stand, he lifted his hand to the wall and searched for the light switch, once he flickered it on, he walked to the mirror, His jet black hair was ruffled, but the long fringe covering one eye remained there. His visible eye was slate grey and squinting at the light that was way too bright. He walked over to the showers and had 5 minute shower, dried himself and got out and got changed.
"We need to wash up the dishes…" Said Ron, not loosing his cheery shine
"I know, lets get to it" Laughed Zak, it only took a few minutes, and they were watching T.V
"You haven't noticed yet Ron" laughed Zak
"Noticed what?"
"Your belched blond hair…" laughed Zak, Ron's Green eye's widened, he ran to the nearest mirror and looked at his white spiky hair, he laughed so hard he couldn't breath.
"You did this? Why didn't Luca say anything?" Laughed Ron
"Yes, I did, and also, the light offended his eyes, and your white hair didn't help, I don't think he could actually see!" Laughed Zak in a reply.
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