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Flame blaziken
October 10th, 2003, 02:26 PM
The boy of light

This is a world with evil and hate
But it wasnt all ways
It was the the pride of evil that stood alone
For this story is told
So their had to be light
So they made a armor of might
It colors were red white and black
Its job to save earth from attack
But who was to wear it
A young boy that was desprite
To save Ghosten the boy was chosen
To be the light in the land of ghosten
So the people found the boy
But the armor was no mere toy
Through the hardest of training
While the people try weapons for the making
Strong the boy could pick up boulders
Leaning on the armors shoulder
Finnaly putting on the armor
Are quest begns to fight someone stronger

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from Flamingtext (http://www.flamingtext.com) <Hope link works But I made the poetry

Blaine
October 12th, 2003, 04:49 PM
I don't like it... Sorry, but I don't. I prefer free verse personally, and I find rhyming left to the extremely skilled. But anyway, I guess I'm supposed to include a follow-up to your poem so here goes.

Realization
Now the quest's importance has donned
Our knights and mages searching
Their training finally showing true
But through the rain and snow and fog
They shall always be searching, the suitor never found.

There, short, sweet, and to the point. There you go, either say ya hate it, love it, or don't love it don't hate it.