View Full Version : It Was So Funny

September 1st, 2008, 1:40 PM
Well, even though it's sort of pointless to make a new thread... but oh well. I'm just posting this because it got a comment immediately after I posted it on another site, Allpoetry. Anyway.

It Was So Funny

People give me funny looks,
And their heads they just shook.
You know, you can stop and stare,
But what’s funny, I’ll never share.

If you took a look at the screen,
Most people would probably scream.
Blood falling down like rain,
And impossible-to-describe pain.

Their face scrunches up in disgust,
Doing this is a must.
Well, that is, except for me,
I just have to laugh with glee.

Stabbed, and stabbed, and stabbed some more,
There is just gore galore.
For some tears start falling down,
I’m just grinning like a clown.

As the bullet hits my skin,
As reality sinks in,
I have to do it one more time.
The last laugh is always mine.


A sort of attempt at rhyming. Also, this is based off of my finding sad things amusing.

September 1st, 2008, 1:45 PM
Thumbs up...like a really cool rock song.:)

I'll give it 8/10 and then I'll look for mistakes.