Heartless33
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- Seen Dec 24, 2008
Not very good with poems but I will give it a shot tell me what you think.
I live in a house nice a small
I really don't have nothing at all
I stay up day and night
really can't enjoy a wounderful sight
I really wish I can play without having to pay
I wish I can enjoy my life without having to pay a price
So tell me how was it, it really didn't make any sense but I did try but I really am not good at poems so I understand if I did anything wrong.
I live in a house nice a small
I really don't have nothing at all
I stay up day and night
really can't enjoy a wounderful sight
I really wish I can play without having to pay
I wish I can enjoy my life without having to pay a price
So tell me how was it, it really didn't make any sense but I did try but I really am not good at poems so I understand if I did anything wrong.