Finglonger
Leper messiah
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- Seen Dec 26, 2005
lol well heres another piece that will probably never get a response but eh whatcha gonna do? this is one Ive been sitting on for a while. I looked at it and realized how bad it actually was(not one of my best pieces lol) so I did a little editing, but I just can't seem to get it down. anyhow any help that anyone can offer would be greatly appreciated. = )
Icarian dreams
Oh to soar unbounded,
beyond the problems of this earth
on waxen wings...
to reach the heavens; to touch the sun;
survive to soar again,
in slumber, blankets sheathed
from distant midnight skies
set my lofty ambitions,
against laws of logic;
And the glare, the rusts
that held me fast, give way
to flights of fancy...
a proud indignation,
glory days,
waft away.
prosperity, wealth all but an illusion
fading as spirits do;
no reconciliation,
no requiem sung for the beloved.
Now boast of pridefulness;
sins of the hypocrisy do not condemn.
as you may fly to the sun,
and nary a wing will burn
rest
rest has come at last
and what was dreamt
now dreams.
Icarian dreams
Oh to soar unbounded,
beyond the problems of this earth
on waxen wings...
to reach the heavens; to touch the sun;
survive to soar again,
in slumber, blankets sheathed
from distant midnight skies
set my lofty ambitions,
against laws of logic;
And the glare, the rusts
that held me fast, give way
to flights of fancy...
a proud indignation,
glory days,
waft away.
prosperity, wealth all but an illusion
fading as spirits do;
no reconciliation,
no requiem sung for the beloved.
Now boast of pridefulness;
sins of the hypocrisy do not condemn.
as you may fly to the sun,
and nary a wing will burn
rest
rest has come at last
and what was dreamt
now dreams.
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