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January 8th, 2005, 11:50 AM

In the blink of an eye,
I can disappear.
Some wonder why,
And no it's not fear.

I melt with society,
With my thoughts to myself.
No one can see me,
For I move with such stealth.

You may wonder why,
I don't just come out.
Out of my shell,
And back onto my route.

Eyes looking through me,
Straight through to my soul.
I feel so constricted,
I cannot play this role.

"Just be yourself",
Is a phrase I have heard.
But I don't believe it,
Not one word.

Before anyone notices,
I am gone with the wind.
I give no farewells,
They too are locked within.

I see no one cares,
I see no one minds.
But your love for me,
Becomes the tie that binds.

Weeee, I got another one for you! ^o^ Well, this one is kind of a fun one, even though it's a bit sad, I still like it. Enjoy everyone! ^_____^


January 8th, 2005, 12:16 PM
i think i remember this one, i'm not sure, but i do know that i likes it ^0^ very nice, kelsey-chan.

January 8th, 2005, 12:19 PM
Awwwwws, thanks Matt! I think this one was posted at your forums, but I can't quite remember. XD Thanks for reading it. <3 *glomps*


January 8th, 2005, 12:22 PM
yeah i think you're right, nevertheless, i like it = 3 u did a great job

January 8th, 2005, 1:19 PM
As usual, great poem Kelsey! I really enjoyed reading it and actully read it a few more times to get a better feel of the meaning. The line "Just be yourself", really meant a lot to me, because at times when you want to be yourself, its hard in certain situations.

Great job all around, I loved the overall flow and poem itself, excellent job.

When I tried to PM you it said that your PM box was full, so it didn't go through ^^'.

January 8th, 2005, 1:55 PM
Oops, it is full, sowwy LT. XD I always forget to empty the darn thing. ><

Thanks so much for reading my poem ,I'm glad you liked it! ^^;


January 8th, 2005, 5:14 PM
O.O Very nice and beautiful tone to it. You know, there's BARELY any good poems around, (reason why I don't go much to the poetry forum) but this is unlike any I ever read before. Very emotional, I could feel a familiar streak to it. Good job, sug ^^


January 8th, 2005, 5:21 PM
wow Kelsey, you should go, like, pro! X3
I really like it! =3

January 8th, 2005, 5:38 PM
Thanks Suz! ^_____^ I'm thinking of putting all my poems into one authorized book once I'm older. It'll be like my side-job to being a Veteranarian. ^_~


January 8th, 2005, 5:44 PM
or you could like, privetly publesh them and sell them on e-bay!

January 16th, 2005, 9:42 AM
XD I suppose I could do that Suz. But for now, I'd rather let my friends and family enjoy reading them. <3