Pokemon Romance(PG)

This is my first fan fic, so hang on. So far, I plan this to be rated PG just because of kissing.
The year is 3 years after pokemon ruby. There are no new places, and no new dangers. There is a new girl in town, and her name is Hannah. There are also a few new boys in town, but this story is about Drake.

Drake raced down the sidewalk toward the Pokemart. He was eager to escape the sun that scorched his feet through his shoes. All of the sudden, he ran into someone, a girl. She got up, and tossed her head and her long dark hair draped over her shoulders. She smiled and her green eyes twinkled. Her face shined brightly.
"Hello," she said,"I'm Hannah"
"And I'm uh... uh... Drake?"
"Are you okay?"
"Yeah, I'm... uh... cool. Yeah, that's it!"
"Well, I have to get going now."
And with that, she started to walk back home.
"Wait!" exclaimed Drake,"Could I... uh... see you again sometime?"
"You mean, like, on a date?"
"Sorry! I didn't mean..."
"Well... I'm quite flattered."
"So..."
"Yes, I will."
"Really, are you sure this isn't a prank or a sick joke?"
"Yes."
And with that, she was off.
"Wait!" called Drake,"When is our date?"
"Is 8:00 okay?"
"Sure!"
"Bye!"
And she was FINALY off.
"I better get to Pokemart soon," said Drake,"I need to buy some new shoes."

it'll really help you on your first fanfic writing if you read the sticky "read first" Pokemon fanfic writing guide... also, it maybe a good thing to read a few fanfic that got a good reputation around here first to see what a good fanfic is like. The fanfic analysis can definitely help you as well.

Have fun in Pokemon fanfic section in the future! =D