The adventures of Blaze and Soar

that was way to short 5/10
 
time to do a shinin...that didn't make sense...specailly the battle scene...he appears twice in the same place
 
okies...it's just not so clear in the 1st one...thanks for clearing that out ^-^
 
Our hero has been warped to another dimension! ZOMG! *GASP!*
Can't wait for number 2. You should make them a few blocks longer though. =)
 
Well it was made good enough, the only thing that I can see to make it better, is keep all the dialogue style constant. Use caps and/or boldness to emphasize something but otherwise keep the dialogue style the same. Also in all the frames, I suggest putting background color to the text. Sometimes text by itsleft is hard to read. But over all good, and I will read the next one when it comes out.
 
its better than my rubbish lol an mine is reallly rubbish lol
 
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