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Esupio
May 22nd, 2005, 05:31 AM
A sprite comic I made out of boredom
the mudkip in the first frame plays an important role


Episode one
http://img267.echo.cx/my.php?image=spritecomic9yj.png

obelisk-kun
May 22nd, 2005, 09:14 AM
that was way to short 5/10

Jolty-kun
May 22nd, 2005, 09:58 AM
that was way to short 5/10

Dude, do you actually think that was all of it?, woah.. ive already spoke to you today, a few times.. o.o;, meh, just try and include more, otherways dont psot at all, if you have problems, be sure to PM me, and ill fix them out

Esupio
May 22nd, 2005, 10:01 AM
I am working on the next now
ok
and this is how long they will all be ok

Fox♠
May 22nd, 2005, 10:36 AM
time to do a shinin...that didn't make sense...specailly the battle scene...he appears twice in the same place

Esupio
May 22nd, 2005, 10:48 AM
actually they aint in the same place
and the mudkip warped Blaze and his pokemon into another dimension where soon to be found out

Fox♠
May 22nd, 2005, 10:57 AM
okies...it's just not so clear in the 1st one...thanks for clearing that out ^-^

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 22nd, 2005, 12:15 PM
Cool comic. ;) Can't wait for number 2. :D
*Sits and waits for number 2.*

Lokhlan
May 23rd, 2005, 12:33 AM
Our hero has been warped to another dimension! ZOMG! *GASP!*
Can't wait for number 2. You should make them a few blocks longer though. =)

DarkPegasus
May 23rd, 2005, 12:41 AM
Ok,weird,it is short,not funny,maybe you'll fix that in number 2.

Esupio
May 23rd, 2005, 10:13 AM
that one is more of a Introduction

Omega Latios
May 31st, 2005, 10:40 AM
Cool Comic Dude! I can't wait for episode 2!

Thomas
June 4th, 2005, 10:29 AM
Well it was made good enough, the only thing that I can see to make it better, is keep all the dialogue style constant. Use caps and/or boldness to emphasize something but otherwise keep the dialogue style the same. Also in all the frames, I suggest putting background color to the text. Sometimes text by itsleft is hard to read. But over all good, and I will read the next one when it comes out.

pokemonfiresofhell
June 4th, 2005, 10:33 AM
its better than my rubbish lol an mine is reallly rubbish lol

Jaybob
June 4th, 2005, 11:25 AM
as everybody sez this is a god comic but it is way to short hopefully episode 2 will be longer