PDA

View Full Version : Endless Rain


Chase Leader
July 23rd, 2005, 07:18 PM
I decided to try a different style of writing...

With a calp of thunder, rain started to pour, and that couldn't be closer to the truth. And as I sat there staring into the world, a rain drop glisined down the window, followed by another. Quite now, can you hear the rain? Does it seem real? Remember to listen though, for the rain gets louder...perfect silence. My thoughts slowly fade, and soon the only thing that mattered was the sound of rain. Sitting there staring into the world, the moon rose high, only to be hidden by the clouds, darkness sets in, and the rain continues its steady course. Tick tock, tick tock, time has now grown to a steady halt, and yet the rain continued its gallent pace. Like a dream, I awoke just as the moon broke free...and slowly the rain had stopped and the clock sped up, tick tock, tick tock, tick tock. This was nice but like a dream it wasn't real and wasn't a place I had grown to love, just a place to find releif.

Xhaiden
August 4th, 2005, 11:49 PM
Wow! It's so deep! I love it! It is definately a unique style of writting, but it fits you well. ^^

Chase Leader
August 8th, 2005, 07:17 PM
Yeah, I decided to take a stab in the dark and I guess it worked out...and I was trying to get out of the habbit of using other peoples styles of writting.

Xhaiden
August 8th, 2005, 09:22 PM
That's a good idea! WHoo! for inventing your own light!

Caroline
August 9th, 2005, 02:01 AM
It's nice and all... but its a little too short. ^^;

nadan the water queen
August 22nd, 2005, 11:07 AM
I loooooooove poems about rain! My favorite!