Fighting a Losing Battle: Gorillaz Roleplay (PG 13 brief mentions alcohol/tobacco

Fighting a Losing Battle: Gorillaz Roleplay (PG for brief mentions alcohol/tobacco

I always start RPs for the fanfics I can't figure anything out for...

Plot: 2D and Murdoc get into a big argument over... a box of cigarettes and a lava lamp? Because Murdoc stole both of them... In the middle of the conflict 2D gets a new girlfriend and Murdoc likes her. LOVES her, more like. He won't leave 2D alone about her and this causes even more conflict and anger between the two. Then 2D steals some of Murdoc's money as revenge and this causes a fight to break out between the two. Will 2D lose the fight? Will 2D's girlfriend fall for Murdoc? Who IS 2D's girlfriend? We can only wait and see... The RP takes place in Kong Studios, of course. Russel tries to break them up several times but refuses to hurt 2D and Murdoc... Well, he runs too fast. So then Noodle talks to both of them and that doesn't work, either. Now for the details... And more story to it...

One night Tazar(see below) goes to visit 2D. While Tazar was there, Murdoc sneaks silently into 2D's room. He steals a lava lamp 2D has in there, and a pack of cigarettes, because he had run out of his own. He managed to get back to mthe Winnebago without being seen, but after Tazar left that night and when 2D went to his room he found out what Murdoc had done and got really, really mad. He stormed out to the 'bago and yelled at Murdoc. Later, 2D goes to a bar and picks up a girl. When he comes back with the girl Murdoc likes her and starts pestering 2D about it. Later, while Murdoc is out, 2D discovers that Murdoc left the Winnebago unlocked and goes in there to find something he can take for revenge and finds a twenty dollar bill on the floor. He takes that and when Muds is back he notices and punches 2D right in the face. 2D fights back, and despite Russel's efforts to break them up and Noodle's efforts to simply calm them down, they continue fighting until one of them goes down...

Band:

2D: ~`PadfootPuppy`~(soon to be bluehairedfreak)
Murdoc:
Noodle:
Russel:

Others:
Tazar: ~`PadfootPuppy`~(he's not in the fanfic yet but I'll make him one of 2D's friends or something...)

Form:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Description:
Personality:

Mine:

Name: Tazar
Age: 23
Gender: male
Description: Tazar always wears shirts with wolves on them. He has gray wolf ears and tail. He always wears blue jeans and black boots, as well as a necklace with a wolf. His hair is blond and very, very hard to describe... Sorta like 2D's, but flatter, because when I drew him he was SUPPOSED to be me... His eyes are blue.
Personality: Tazar is shy on the outside but on the inside he has a raging desire to just turn around and kill someone, anyone... He collects daggers and anything wolf. He listens to the Gorillaz' music all the time and is friends with 2D. He is rather clumsy most of the time. All he ever drinks is Mountain Dew because he used to be addicted to alcohol but decided to get addicted to caffiene instead. He also smokes sometimes but not very often.

The Gorillaz are copyright to Kong Studios.

The plot...its too insufficient...it doesn't even go by forum standards...I think you should really extend it...and be more detailed...otherwise a mod'll close this..

Any better? I edited it... I didn't a plot had to be 5 pages long.

Three main things are needed in a plot:

Originality: Which will draw members to the RPG, the last thing you want to do is a have a plot about a bunch of trainers going on a journey as you would see in the Pokemon Anime, no, you want a good story with a few plot twists. We are not stopping you from starting a Trainer RP, but it would be an idea to add a few plot twists and some adventure, this is what draws members to your RPG.

Detail: Description, History and emotions all come into the detail of a Plot; with out detail the plot will have no feel and therefore not attract members. Were not saying it has to be a 14 page essay, but make it more than 4 lines and add some description into it to allow members to have the idea of what the plot is about.

Interest: Originality and Detail all come into the interest of the plot. You want to draw members to the RPG so make it interesting by adding a few plot twists and furthermore, just making up your own story.

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Try following the thingy and try rewriting the plot. So it makes people want to join your RP and drives it away from being hopelessly destroyed..

BETTER? I don't know what to PUT...

Well you can do a paragraph or two. Begin with an intro then move your way into the RP, the characters, some background on where the RP takes place and other important details. Get your readers a feel of the action before they really get into it. If you can't do that then I suggest you ask a mod to close this and do a new and improved RP.

I'll try that. ^^; Pika-mew, I see you... Join. 0.o;

EDIT: OMFG I can use DETAIL!!! Wowwwww..... 0.o;

~`PadfootPuppy`~ said:

I'll try that. ^^; Pika-mew, I see you... Join. 0.o;

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I see no Pika-mew here. *shifty eyes* And what happened to your other RP, the crossover one? *sprints toward the exit but falls*

It died. Join... RAWRNESS.

*looks at Padfoot nervously* Okay, okay, I'll join. Please don't eat me. o.o I don't really know who the Gorillaz are though. :nervous: *sweatdrop*

ARGH!!! Why? 0.o; WHY???? **** you, go look up on google image search 2D Gorillaz for pics of 2D. ^^

o_O Okie.... *replies so as not to disappoint her friend and, more importantly, to not be murdered*

Name: (lessee, Gorillaz-ish name, Gorillaz-ish name....) Amy. XD
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Description: She has long brown hair(somewhere between shoulder-length and waist length) that she usually ties in a braid with a black ribbon. She always wears black clothes, usually with an insult written somewhere on them. Her favorite shirt has a white falcon design on it. Along with these black shirts, she wears jeans or black pants(wow a lot of black XD). Around her neck she wears a sky-blue necklace with a teardrop-shaped sapphire on it. She has sad, distant green eyes that always make it seem like her mind is somewhere else.
Personality: Quiet, distant, thoughtful, and dreamy, Amy barely ever says a word. As a child, she lived with her grandparents in the country and grew up without much human contact. As a result, she has no friends, and usually people don't even try to talk to her. She tries to be kind to people but can't help being a bit cold sometimes. A highly depressed person, Amy prefers the company of animals to people, and never lets anyone in.

That thorough enough for ya? ^-^

https://www.sttproductions.de/other/gorillaz/gallery.htm Here, pics of da whole band. ;3

Yaarrr, 'tis. Maybe you'll get to be Stu-pot's gf... We will never know...

Uh-oh... *dun dun dun* Though, that would be an interesting part to play. ^-^ We'll just have to wait and see.... Gah, where are....people? 0.o

I will eat you if you don't hurry up and post in YOUR RP. 0.o; ****, I'm spamming my own RP.

*bump* Sorry about teh double post... *poketh*, but I'm going to start this RP.

Coolness! ^^ We shall be waiting.

*AHEM* *coughcough* I can't RP Murdoc too well, bear with me... XD; Tazar's nickname is Tuzzcat, btw. And If anyone else joins they're welcome to play the rest of the band! ^^; Amy, can you, like, play someone? 0.o;

IC:

The doorbell rang at Kong Studios. 2D threw his magazine against the wall in his room and ran down the hall to answer the door. "Hello, Tuzzcat, love, come in," he said as he opened the door. The 27-year-old stepped in, a cigarette hanging loosely from his mouth, and a dagger fro his collection hanging from one hand, as usual. 2D led his friend into the living room and they sat down on the couch. "Hey, Stu-pot, where's Muds? Didn't see him in the 'bago..." Tazar asked. "'E's probably in there asleep," 2D replied with an awkward smile.
"Whatever," Tazar muttered.

OOC: Who? o_O

IC:

A girl stood on a nearby street corner, watching from there as a man entered Kong Studios. She was clothed entirely in black, aside from the fact that her black t-shirt had a white picture of a falcon on it. She flicked a bang out of her distant eyes so as to see him better, just as he disappeared into the room. Sighing, she slumped against the wall of the nearest building, her hands unconsciously fingering the teardrop-shaped gem around her neck. "Life is so dull," she murmured, staring at it.

OOC: Forget it... XD; I can probably do it if I can write them all into a fanfiction. 0.o;

After a few hours of watching TV, 2D said, "C'mon, let's go into m'room." He led Tazar down the hall to his room. "Wot... wait a minute, where's m'lava lamp?" "Murdoc," Tazar muttered and rushed out of the room. 2D was close behind. "MUDS! Get out here, now!" he roared at the door of the Winnebago. The door opened. "Where did you put my lava lamp? And my cigarettes?" 2D growled. Tazar was aiming his dagger at Murdoc's chest. "Dunno, dullard. Why're you asking me?" Murdoc asked.
"Because I don't think Russ and Noods would've touched either!"
"Get outte here, dullard. Never come back, either."
"I think I should go home," Tazar muttered. He left, walking down the sidewalk and not even paying attantion to the girl. 2D stormed after him, but he just wanted to cool down. Unlike Tazar, he noticed the girl. He stopped and looked at her. "Have you beeen watching the whole time?" he asked her.