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Trikip
January 6th, 2006, 02:30 PM
I'm new at this stuff... well this is my comic, The Adventures of Homie Joe. I'll make a few of these, and if you guys like them, I will continue.

Episode 1 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v420/JirachiMaster/homiejoe.png)
Episode 2 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v420/JirachiMaster/homiejoe2.png)
Episode 3 (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v420/JirachiMaster/homiejoe3.png)

Signomi
January 6th, 2006, 02:32 PM
Hmm, nice, though can't really say it's a Sprite Comic, it has no sprites in it. I think a comic like this would be best off in the Art Gallery. So I shall move this along for you :)

~Moved.

Trikip
January 6th, 2006, 02:43 PM
Sorry, I wasn't 100% sure it would go there.

Jindai
January 8th, 2006, 03:58 PM
Ha! MJ! Tee hee hee ha!

Jindai

Karasu
January 8th, 2006, 04:02 PM
Lol, that's funny. Teh Pizza dude was really MJ... o.o;;; XD

Dactylus
January 8th, 2006, 07:47 PM
Yeaaaah...sorry bud, that's not too funny. Or well-drawn.

Extend the comic size and make a coherent story, it'd work much better if it wasn't two panels in each comic. I say two because the first and fourth are pretty much the same throughout. Yeah. Also, It's fine that the art isn't good, but try to fit your humor to compliment it, perhaps adding more sarcasm, which CONTRASTS the art therefore complimenting it!

It doesn't make sense now, but I've totally seen it work.

kohei
January 9th, 2006, 10:44 PM
Short, and the art is not really to my preference, but as a short comedy, it works.

I love the "Find out Soon!" in each episode!

John Denver
January 10th, 2006, 06:07 AM
I like how each one ended in suspense!!