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Asura Nirosuki
January 12th, 2006, 02:33 AM
This is my very first short peom ever written, It's based on what It feels in my heart to have a best friend, I hope some of you enjoy reading this. ^______________^ <3<3<3<3<3 ~Maya Miyazono


~Love and It's ways~

When I have you by me, I have a tomorrow to look foward to.
Because I can't continue on with you,
As I shut my eyes I can still feel you so close to me, I guess that's love~

I want to be sided by you forever,
To have the moment be just like this,
They say that true Love will last forever,
I promise to make those words true for you.

Since you know how much pain those tears in your eyes can bring,
You say I don't understand, you turn from the love thats given by my heart,
But I can feel a definite meaning in them,

I want these feelings to find their way into your heart without me speaking a word.

To always be true to eachother, To make it feel to great to be a dream,
To learn the ways of the heart,
Even if you still choose to wait for your knight in shining armor,
I want to make you Believe....

wakachamo
January 12th, 2006, 09:27 AM
It is very nice! It's as if I can actually feel what you feel! 10/10 *claps* XP

Even though the meaning is strong, you can still keep the rythm going! Amazing! XD

QT Celebi
January 12th, 2006, 10:01 AM
Yep 10/10 It's beautiful! ^^ I wish I was that at poems and writing! ^^