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Strider
January 26th, 2006, 09:27 AM
Silent conversation we speak
A lonely world no more we shall seek
Your words flashes inside my mind
Fleetingly I wish they are a sign

For when your lips part slowly
Words of yours come out lovely
I keep imagining how it feels
the breath of love that heals

Gently the way your irises sway
Of no pictures can ever portray
So I look deep inside them within
To find the jewels most saccharine

Comments and suggestions are appreciated.

fallen_angel
February 6th, 2006, 06:54 PM
That's really good. I wished it was longer since it was really poetic and wow. ^_^