Hika Art.

[Hikarii]

Yeah, I decided to post up my art, even though I'm not too confident about it. XD Yes, I think I suck. =P This is my first thread, I think. Hmm.

Anyway, I was kinda trying to do my homework, but I wanted to draw. So my friend told me to draw ON my homework. Why not? So I did. I felt like drawing Red, so I tried my hand at it. I've tried before, but I gave up on it most of the time. When I'm trying to draw someone I love, I just caaan't, because I'm scared I'll mess him up, or kill him in my style. Surprisingly, I actually finished this time, as well as coloring it with my crappy pencil shading skills. o.0

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/pillbunny/hahahnopng.jpg
Yepyep, feel free to critique. I must warn you that I have horrible confidence, but I'll try my best to accept the obvious mistakes I make. But don't let that stop you from shooting me down! Oh, no. Help me get stronger. <3

Oh, I'll point out a few things I know might be a bit.. off.
-First of all, my pencil shading SUCKS. Okay? I can't color anything to save my life. So shadows on the wrong side, or shadows that are absent... Point them out to me, and why you think so.
-Uhm. I can't draw hands.
-Clothing folds are my weakness
-I think his head is off. Either the neck, or something else. Something's just weird there, I think
-I don't know why, but everytime I try, I fail to draw a Pikachu.
-Uh. Anything else? x3;

EDIT: OMG! Ignore my homework stuff. XDDD Right after I finished writing the whole page, I realized it should've been done on this one handout I was given. T~T;

[Forest Grovyle]

Awwwwww, this is cute! ^_^ I really like the way you have given Pikachu your own unique style. :D You don't suck at all - don't put yourself down! ;) You have a lot of talent!

The only real tip I can give is not to draw on lined paper (though I take it that was all you had to hand at the time!) But this is really nice - can't wait to see more from you!

--FG

[Hikarii]

^^a Thank you. That's why I'm trying to post my art. I need the confidence/critique. x3 And yep, notebook paper was what I had at the time, hence, drawing ON my homework. =D

[mistywishmaker]

^Very cute! He looks just like Red from the Manga! And your pencil-skills are very good. You'd be amazing at digitalizing it, I'll bet ^^ Good job!

[Himawarii]

Red x33 He looks so adorable the way ya drew him x3 I give ya a 10/10 <3 Nice job <3 Must say it'd look great in colour :3

[DarkClown]

Wow!....omg Wow!....best I Eva Saw!!!

[Gohan]

Actually, the hands are pretty good. You wouldn't want to see my attempts. :) Clothing folds.... I think you did pretty good actually, but I can't comment on clothing folds, 'cause I'm no so good at them myself. Overall, very nice work. I hope to see more from you. :D

[exteradude]

I'd give you 100000000000000000000000000/10!!!! It's very good.

[Ibuberu]

Red looks great, like, don't pull yourself done!^^

I don't see any problems with the hands, infact, they look real Feebas. His neck..it may be a bit too big, either that, or I need to get my eyes checked.^^ I also Feebas the way you drew Pikachu, and Red's eyes. You're talented, hope you show more work soon!
Oh, and I feel the same way, on drawing the dude one likes. Tis' too hard.XD

[~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~]

That is amazing really.

~Dark Venusaur