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Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
February 27th, 2006, 5:37 PM

Kid, there was a look upon your face..
When she closeted all of your your fears in a cage.
When the moon was oculting your secrets...
You fled from illusions, and hid on the back of the stage.

Breathe, child of the solitude songs!

Bringing those memories filled with temptations,
Burning the pictures of fake stars.
You cried for a life of false accusations
And you killed to remove your permanent scars.

And you ran for the peril, you wished for a spin
But you were abandoned, with a lunatic grin.
Breathe, don't you walk against the stream;
This long desolation does not fill your dream.

And if they're willing to shoot, if they're craving for murder
You can ride on the deep breeze.
Those who crawl for denial, who search for negation
Those who become the disease,
They can blow away feelings, they can tear down the grief
And then pull each other with ease.

So stand, and cherish your welcome, don't wait to trigger the gun
Just glare at the great lonesome target, your despondent face-cracking sun.

Breathe, you child of the lonely eyes!
You alone can stop the thunder in the skies.
And for to touch with melancholy, the unceasing strain
Look for the weeping boy under the rain.

We can turn into fiends, of greed and despair
And vanish our worries into the air
Then pull off the swords, ready to seathe,
And watch all the innocent trying to breathe.


You might think it's a bit obnoxious, but It's not really that way ^^; I'm making some sort of epic//story with all my poems, I'll explain all of 'em when I'm done, and I'm posting those that I like very much. See it this way, the poems I post are the 'singles' for a poetry 'album'. XD;;;

February 27th, 2006, 5:40 PM
ur poems r really good, if i would i give it a scale from 1-10 i would give it a 10 ^^ nice job and don't give up on it, i think u have talent with this.

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
February 27th, 2006, 7:49 PM
Thanks, of course I'm not going to give up on it. I feel flattered =O

More comments, please. =3