The strenght of fire

The strenght of fire
A great empire
It never listens to your desire

It travels in a mace
It burns from place to place
If you're not aware, it will burn in your face

Fire gives us heat and light
But sometimes it will start a fight
It might end with disaster
There's no doubt who's the master


I made this because i wanna try something new=) Hope it is okay^.^

It's alright, Short and sweet ^_^

Poetry.....such a beutiful thing especially when it's about something as cool as fire. :)

:#-) *Blush*

Thanx=)
I know sentace no. 2 got a little far off 0_o
I'll make something new later^_^

A nice poem. As was mentioned before, the quadtrain was a little shocking, as it didn't really fit with the rest of the poem. My advice: Try and keep your stanzas to they somewhat match. They don't have to be generic by any standards, just make the style, rhythm, and flow carry through the entire poem. It really does help.