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Pandoras Box
April 16th, 2006, 12:56 PM
ok here are some of my scratch i will have more later please rate them

http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/8421/seacter6jd.png
Sedacter

http://img421.imageshack.us/img421/3489/headletter2ft.png
Head Letter 1 of 25

I am accepting any ideas for any more scratches i cant think of anything else

NEW
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/1553/humptydumptytapedup6hz.png
Humpty Dumpty All Taped Up

Signomi
April 16th, 2006, 01:09 PM
Erm, how about getting the actual image of your first piece of artwork rather than a thumbnail? Due to it being cropped; then perhaps we can evaluate it properly.

And as for your second piece, can't really say it looks quite like pixel art. I'd say what you need to work on would be the shading and the outline. On the outline, you have many excess pixels (which I'd recommend erasing) also, don't only use black for the outline; try using different shades of the main colour you've used. For instance, your main colour scheme is green, therefore use different shades of green for the outline. Depending on where the light source hits, you'd have to use different shades for a certain area on the outline; darker shades for areas that would be expected to be coated in some darkness and a much lighter shade for where the light source is actually facing, it would make your piece look much more 3D and pixel like.

Now, the shading. Refer to this (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=62480) stickied thread for other shading forms you can use. I'd recommend trying them out, for it may improve on your method of shading, which right now doesn't really improve it's presentation.

Otherwise, nice try, keep at it.

EDIT -- The same goes for your humpty-dumpty piece. It's nice but it requires most of the content I've stated above.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
April 16th, 2006, 01:44 PM
Thats funny Humpty Dumpty finally taped up. That letter "A" looks very creepy I wonder how the other 24 will look.

:t003:Dark Venusaur

Pandoras Box
April 16th, 2006, 01:46 PM
ok would you like to give me some suggestions for my next one

UPDATE

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6354/heart2uw.png

i will work on it more later

Signomi
April 16th, 2006, 02:06 PM
Oh, and try to avoid double posting, especially when you've only made your last post not long ago. Simply use the edit button. And plus, I'd recommend looking at my criticism above, since I still say the same thing for your latest piece of work.

maxxa
April 18th, 2006, 04:39 AM
hmmmmmm maybe for your next piece try ummmmmm.............B lol

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~
April 18th, 2006, 07:04 AM
Try the whole keyboard on a standard Computer.

:t003:Dark Venusaur

Zone
April 18th, 2006, 11:02 AM
They're not too good. They appear to have been made either freehand or with the oval tools in MS Paint, and the shading isn't good.

Leo Dimshine
April 18th, 2006, 03:41 PM
^_- Gwaa.... Well they look decent.^_- Nothing I'd make would look better. :P

Jedite1000
April 18th, 2006, 05:20 PM
ok they are a bit rough but i like it ,the letter A could use some more work,the heart could be more straighter, the humpty one is alright, propbly the best, so ill give u a 7/10 :)

Pandoras Box
May 13th, 2006, 08:34 AM
i have some new ones

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/8915/yingyang8de.png

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/5682/yingyang1be.png

Pandoras Box
May 16th, 2006, 01:41 PM
hello anyone gonna take a looka t these new ones

Zone
May 16th, 2006, 02:33 PM
If nobody posted, you shouldn't bump it, you should accept that nobody posted because nobody cares. I know I don't care about circles and ovals.