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April 22nd, 2007, 3:48 PM
Are words spoken between lovers
In tender sighs and whispers,

Is comfort one finds in embrace
As two dance in serene grace

Are caresses across fingertips
Kisses on her cheek or her lips

April 23rd, 2007, 7:08 AM
mmmm? is that a free verse? i havent seen a poem like that one...till now...

it's short and it could use a little more detail...but its nice though...it kinda gave some rhyming words too...hehe...

oni flygon
April 24th, 2007, 7:25 PM
"Brevity is the soul of wit" Polonius from Shakespeare's Hamlet would say.

Although it's short, it's sweet and sums up a single brief moment, a mellow slow dance in a picturesque moment. I guess you should write a bit more because I'm getting used to your poems now...