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Yesterday
April 22nd, 2007, 03:48 PM
Soft-
Are words spoken between lovers
In tender sighs and whispers,

Soft-
Is comfort one finds in embrace
As two dance in serene grace

Soft-
Are caresses across fingertips
Kisses on her cheek or her lips

phantom_zangetsu
April 23rd, 2007, 07:08 AM
mmmm? is that a free verse? i havent seen a poem like that one...till now...

it's short and it could use a little more detail...but its nice though...it kinda gave some rhyming words too...hehe...

oni flygon
April 24th, 2007, 07:25 PM
"Brevity is the soul of wit" Polonius from Shakespeare's Hamlet would say.

Although it's short, it's sweet and sums up a single brief moment, a mellow slow dance in a picturesque moment. I guess you should write a bit more because I'm getting used to your poems now...