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The Crystal [pg-16]

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    Seal you should have 2 paragraphs per secton. Pending.
     

    LordSephy

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  • Hey, I'm gonna type up a SU later, hopefully you'll be glad to have me, this RP sounds really good dude, good job
     

    LordSephy

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  • Name: Shen Iwosaki

    Gender:

    Age: 19

    Faction: Arleon Lieutenant/Second in command of squad

    Personality: Shen is kind, but emotianally distant due to never having any real attachments and has no qualms about killing his opponents. Shen prefers to fight alone, but he is a loyal soldier and will follow the orders of his superiors without question unless there is obviously something wrong. Above all Shen's life is based on fighting and he respects nothing more than fighting skill, considering only queens and generals deserving of more respect than skilled warriors and although he loves fighting he dislikes bloodshed and prefers to settle arguments with a 1-on-1 duel of submission.

    Appearance: Casual/Without Armor:
    The Crystal [pg-16]
    Wearing Armor:
    The Crystal [pg-16]
    Shen is 6'4


    History: Shen has been an orphan his entire life, do to a strange group of events he has no memory before the day he woke up in the middle of a forest near Arleon's castle when he was 6 other than his own name, he was taken in by the King and Queen.

    As soon as Shen was given permission he began training in his swordsmanship with the best trainers the kingdom had to offer, he seemed to be a natural, so he continued to train with the sword until he began knocking his training partners unconcious or putting them in the hospital after he turned seventeen, so he was sent out to train where he wouldn't hurt citizens of Arleon.

    Shen traveled around a large part of the known world for two years fighting in tournaments and training with the best warriors he could find. During his travels he was heading towards the largest tournament yet when Shen stopped in a small village that was having problems with a Scyther so he searched until he found it in a nearby vegetable field, the Scyther was really fast and physically stronger than he was, so eventually when it flew up and sent a razor wind at him he dodged it and hit the Scyther in the head with a rock, which slowed it down and gave him an opportunity to subdue it, later he tamed it, he never gave it a name.

    When Shen finally made it to his long sought after tournament he fought with all he could and made it to the final round where he faced a man in dazzling white armor, this man called himself only the White Knight, in less than 5 seconds the knight knocked Shen off his feet and put the tip of his sword to Shen's neck, the man asked him. "Do you have any last words, child?" To which his only reply was. "Would you please train me great warrior?" The man turned out to be dying of a strange disease which did practically nothing to the body one day it suddenly killed the victim out of nowhere, the only sign of the disease was a circle of blackened skin appearing on the center of the person's chest which slowly grew bigger until it killed it's victim. The man agreed to train Shen so he could pass on his rare style before he died. Shen spent 4 months training under his new mentor his name he never learned in a nameless sword style that focused on turning defense INTO offense with a mix of pure power, speed, and pression, such as bashing in incoming sword with a shield instead of just using it to block the attack. Eventually the mentor came up to Shen and told him that he was going to die soon, so he passed onto Shen his sword, shield, armor and last but not least, the title of White Knight, he died peacefully in his sleep that night, and so when Shen returned to Arleon in the middle of it's war with Wither, it was not Shen Iwosaki that returned but the White Knight.

    Shen only calls himself the White Knight now, so the only people who know his real name are those who knew him before he left on his journey. When he learned of the situation going on in the kingdom and what had happened since he left he immediately swore fealty to the queen, the woman who had most raised him from a child, in his time fighting for Arleon he has brushed with Leon multiple times and wants nothing more than to defeat him because his skills are such a threat to Arleon, neither of them ever managed to get in a one-on-one fight with the other, thus it is still unknown who is more skilled. The Queen called in Shen to be a high ranking officer within the new elite squad because of his great fighting skills and experience in leadership.
    Pokemon: Scizor named Warden who for some reason evolved when he touched the White Knight armor, he is as serious as Shen if not even more so.

    RP sample: Same thing i put here for EXTERMINATION.
     
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    X75flames

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    LordSephy, your SU is pretty short, and the History should be broken up into sections, but I've RP'ed with you before, and what you can do. Accepted.
     

    LordSephy

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  • sorry about that, I changed it up a bit, I think the main reason it seems short is the pictures instead of appearance details and that there's no RP example, I'll add onto it as more ideas hit me though.

    Also, Skyknight and I discussed it, I'll be the second in command.
     
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    X75flames

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    sorry about that, I changed it up a bit, I think the main reason it seems short is the pictures instead of appearance details and that there's no RP example, I'll add onto it as more ideas hit me though.

    Also, Skyknight and I discussed it, I'll be the second in command.
    No, it was short beacuse you have 2 sentences for you personality :P

    And I talked to SkyKnight, and know whats going on, but thanks for trying to keep me up to speed.
     

    MegaSlowBro.

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  • Name: Adric Griffin
    Gender: Male
    Age: 21
    Faction: Arleon
    Personality:
    ~Without Bond~
    A fair and just lieutenant, Adric is a strong leader - despite his young age. He will look at things fairly, and decide with a cool head. Respectful to his superiors and underclassmen, he is well known around the kingdom. Always willing to lend a helping hand, Adric possesses the strong qualities of a leader.
    ~With Bond~
    When Adric is bonded with Takeo (Pupitar), he completely changes. His gentle side is pushed away while his careless and more ruthless side takes its place. Adric will become reckless in whatever he is doing, no matter what the situation is. He is willing to accomplish the task received at any cost - even human lives. Because of this, Adric has only used his bond in extreme situations. Even though his normal personality can appear in this form, it is only seldom.
    Appearance:
    II Without Armor II

    https://media.photobucket.com/image/fire%20emblem%20raven/NecroNinja/Medieval/Raven.jpg?o=47

    II With Armor II
    *All pictures are to be altered as such*
    -White Armor-
    -Same red hair as previous picture (without armor)-

    https://media.photobucket.com/image/fire%20emblem%20kent/InsaneCrazyPsycho/Fire%20Emblem/Kent.jpg?o=1
    (Everyday Armor)

    https://media.photobucket.com/image/fire%20emblem%20black%20knight/kill45/Twilight/TwilightFEBlackKnight.jpg?o=36
    (In Battle)

    History:
    Spoiler:



    Pokemon:
    -Pupitar-
    ~Gender: Male
    ~Nickname: Takeo

    RP Sample:
    Spoiler:


    THIS IS WHAT I HAVE SO FAR, WILL BE EDITING LATER.
     
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    X75flames

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    SkyKnight, when you SoulBound with your pokemon, is when you use the crystal to for a bond. Theres no fusing mid-battle. Sorry, edit that, and I look forward to your RP sample.
     

    LordSephy

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  • No, it was short beacuse you have 2 sentences for you personality :P

    And I talked to SkyKnight, and know whats going on, but thanks for trying to keep me up to speed.

    Yeah, but I guess that's because Shen is a fairly simple and straightforward person, plus he's still young and his personality is still adaptable, it will probably change in a couple ways during the story, that's why with personality I just give a basic overview
     

    X75flames

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    I've edited my original sign-up, hope it's ok.
    Your History should be a bit longer, and you can only have one pokemon. Other than that Accepted once you fix that.


    Once you fix that, andSkyKnight finishes her SU, we can start. We have 3 a team plus 3 pokemon a team. It should work out, but I will leave the SUs open for anyone joining at a latter date, since we are still kind of small.
     
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    LordSephy

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  • Maybe you should do that Organize all the SU's and teams in the first post some of the best have done, so if anybody needs to know about anyone else we can all just check the first post.
     

    X75flames

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    Maybe you should do that Organize all the SU's and teams in the first post some of the best have done, so if anybody needs to know about anyone else we can all just check the first post.

    I dont think we'll have enough room in the OP, but I'll try to put it in the OOC.


    OOC is updated with all the SU's in the OP -_- .....too ..... big......
     
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