Have a look at some other IC threads like this and this and you can see they provide a lot more information, as well as a firm starting point/story for their players to continue from.
Try to include the rules again, and a player list. Then work on building up your introduction slightly more. I'm not expecting you to copy those, just take one or two pointers :). It doesn't need much work to be approved.
Try to include the rules again, and a player list. Then work on building up your introduction slightly more. I'm not expecting you to copy those, just take one or two pointers :). It doesn't need much work to be approved.