To be honest? You struck me as being clearly on the better half of writers here, skill-wise. Not like there was anything wrong with the RP you submitted beyond that it looked vague enough to confuse your average sectiongoer a bit. The revised version is all well and good though, and it's up now.
Sorry for the late update, I keep running into database errors and browser failures when moderating and studies don't leave nearly as much time to devote to it as my usual.