Recent content by brmsort

K, info. The site is up, but there is almost nothing on it yet. www.sonicandfriends.com Click beneath the walking Pikachu (ignore the "under construction" text"). I do not allow lemons or such other materials. Any thing else will be great (action, romance, etc.) Also, any fan-made art (except...

Hey y'all. My name is BrmSort. I had a Sonic site for some time. I decided it was time to expand. I have begun of a new site that has both Sonic and Pokemon materials. PROBLEM! I need material. If you are fanartists or fanfiction writers, please send me your materials COMPRESSED with WinZip or...

Hey! I'm 20 and like Pikachu better. Thank you very much. :D

There are some folks out there that dislike things merely because they are popular and not for any real reason of logic or religious conviction. That is foundation of all the anti-Pokemon sites: to rebel against the popular.

My take is this: I love Pokemon, even though I am 20 years old. In fact, I just put a giant Pikachu vinyl decal on my pickup -- which earned me much ridicule at work. :D But I don't care. If I like, I'll declare it openly. As for what is happening in the realm of Pokemon's popularity, I agree...

Actually, I am in the minority. I liked 4ever better than Heroes. Not that Heroes wasn't good, and the graphics ROCK. But the english version (I don't know about the Japanese version) paid TOO much detail to the graphics and not enough on story. I mean that whole running through the city scene...

You betcha! And I would get myself a Pikachu, just like Ash. No matter what anyone may say, Pikachu are cool! And I would like to travel with Ash, convince him that he really does love Misty. And I would ask Melody on a date. *drools* And every other day, I would kick some Team Rocket butt.

"It's a whole new place, with a brand new attitude. . ." can you guess which one I picked? But I love them all.

Well, guess we'll never know. I still think Latias, but I'm not going to get in a tizzy over it.

Sorry, but I am lost. Try adding more detail and less dialogue. But maybe things will look better when the intro is over. It has the potential; just bring it to fruition.

Well, it's a good intro. I'm not sure where this is heading, but I look forward to its completion.

Well, you are right that a balance must be obtained. I usually do not criticize grammatical/mechanical/spelling errors if they are not excessive. As a general criticism, avoid long strings of adjectives and long strings of "one line" dialogues. Those are the #1 mistakes of many inexperienced...

Once again, your work is superb. Keep up the awsome work.

oh, oh, can't . . . wait . . . must . . . have . . . more!! Love it! I eargerly anticipate the full series. Will you be posting the full series here or on another site?

As a fellow fanfic writer, I say it was well done. Once I set up my fanfic site, I will probably contact you if you wish to post fanfiction.