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(PREVIEW) Chapter 12: Groudon Awakened, Part 2: A New Team! Fang screamed in pain, sitting as she got a hold of her knee, wincing with pain as Green ran outside. “Fang, are you ok?!!” He asked, carrying her. “I hit my knee, Green! It hurts so much!!” He ran inside and laid her on...

(OH GEEZ I FORGOT THIS SITE EXISTED) Chapter 11: Groudon Awakened, Part 1: Normal Life... or so we thought “Fang, wake up…” Green said in a half-asleep voice. He reached across the bed to touch the mattress, because Fang had already woken up. She was making her way back from the Pelipper Post...

I don't pay attention to satisfaction at all. I just see if it's good and I can keep going. I rely on reviews to help me write as well.

Actually, they started after... My conversation with Aisu should reveal a bit.

Chapter 7: Sorrows Remarked “Here’s the plan.” SonicBlade said, slamming his fist on a table. He soon directed our attention to his hand-drawn map. “We look through the village and try to find a trail of blood. Once we find a single hint of that, we track the portal to the Voidlands.” I...

Chapter 10: Malicious Lies Fang stretched as she woke up, yawning as she looked at Green. She smiled at him as she stood up, approaching Green as he was preparing a Berry feast for the team. He smiled as he felt Fang’s hands on both sides of his body, soon enveloping him in a hug from behind...

To add on to what Elektra said, I recommend practicing art not occasionally, but once a day, to take a small break from writing. And you could still be good at both!

Chapter 6: Trouble in Paradise! The morning we woke up, we heard Lapras screaming. Running over to her, I asked, “Lapras? What happened?” She was shaking. “I-It's Serene Village… something's gone wrong!” She said. “Mina was suddenly cut off while she was screaming!” We knew what was up...

Chapter 5: The Date(Real Chapter 5 was cut out for extreme sexual content) After a few crazy rounds of sex, especially after SonicBlade evolved in the first round, SonicBlade and I were discussing some future plans. "You know... I think we kinda messed up." I said, smiling. "How so?" SonicBlade...

Chapter 9: The Icy Battle Ahead Fang soon faced the creature and asked, “So.. who are you, anyway?” The Fox chuckled and responded, “I am Ninetales. The one who cursed a human.” “Well… am I that human?” “You'll be happy to know that you're not the human.” “Is… is that true?” “Would I lie to...

6: For that, well... Yami was able to sense that she wasn't from around there because of her scent. She doesn't smell like a Pokemon. As for buying it so quickly, Green did the same thing when Fang first came to the Pokemon world. And in a Mystery Dungeon... a Pokemon can just jump right out at...

(To Bardothren: Thanks for the feedback! You can expect the prologue and Chapter 1 to look different when I'm finished editing both! Oh, and I forgot to mention that this is Super Mystery Dungeon based. Sorry!) When I woke up, I sighed as I sat up. My eyes were heavy as I muttered to myself...

Chapter 3: Wait, is Mike,,, The next day, I woke up on the floor, and my back was hurting. A lot. I must've fallen off the couch as I slept. But that didn’t matter much to me. I stood up as I walked over to Mina’s room, which I found her sleeping, Still. I shook her shoulder, but she didn’t...

Chapter 2: SonicBlade Leaves His Mark As we talked, I noticed SonicBlade walking out of the house down to us. “Sorry I’m late, guys.” He said, smiling. Sarah waved and blushed. “It’s fine.” Mina said, smiling at him. “Mina and I were just walking around while we waited for you.” He smiled...

Chapter 1: Moving In(WARNING: SPOILERS) I had my bag packed when I set out into Serene Town. Ever since Mr. Rifi ran away apologizing to me, I had nowhere else to go. I considered SonicBlade’s house, but then I remembered: He was trying to catch up with his dad. So my friend, Mina(An...